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7/26 c15 26LolaTheSa
So how Edward a pig head? No ONE TELLS HIM THIS SHIT until shit hits the fan.
5/25/2014 c15 2Bworms1980
It's really hard to enjoy these stories. There are tons, TONS of stories where Edward screws up and gets what he deserves. Even his family gets mad at him. When there are stories where Bella screws up Edward is immediately forgiving. If he isn't, he is made out to be the jerk and his family still takes Bella's side. Is that fair? This is a good story, but its hard to stay objective when I see this happen time and again. Edward has a right to be upset. There is no reason people should be mad at him. Bella does something wrong and excuses are made for her time and again.
8/25/2012 c1 LuvBugsMum
I was enjoying this story and remembering bits and pieces of it but then I got to the point were Nessie has the iq of a high school student and is only 7 but still seems to be very young through the whole story up till now. Then I couldn't focus on anything anymore. I was confused as to why all of a sudden you chose to go that route when she was introduced to us as a normal 7 year old.
8/13/2012 c18 2Jojo657
dang is all i have to say that was flabbergasting bruh dang
8/12/2011 c18 Daggers4U
dun-dun-duunnn! Oh my-u sure know how to set us up with cliffies, don't u?

Yay I'm heading over to the sequel Now!
8/12/2011 c11 Daggers4U
Augh Edward! Let her talk! She needs to say it!

Woman u killin' me with suspense ~_^ = I Like it! Let's do lunch!
8/12/2011 c10 Daggers4U
Bella SO had this coming! LoL I know I know - I'm all hatin' on Bells but, damn! Its Edwards daughter! Its not like she was raped or that he beat her, etc. -they were in love AND she had a promise ring!

Wow I need to check my blood pressure lol

This stories great!
8/12/2011 c7 Daggers4U
GAH SHE'S SO STUPID! I WANNA SLAP HER!

Everything we were made at SM's Edward for (i.e. deciding whats best for everyone himself without their imput) THIS Bella is doing! man I don't even care about her so-called reasons=she's WRONG!

And Charlie's right. Poor Nessie...
8/12/2011 c2 Daggers4U
*Sniff* awww!
8/12/2011 c1 Daggers4U
Ohh me likey already!
7/30/2011 c18 16xXxhurting-insidexXx
I Found It! I Realized That I've NeVeR Reviewed This Story & So I Couldn't Remember It! But I Read It & Am Now Heading To Da Sequel : )) .. Pure Genius! I Cried A Few Times & Laughed A Few Times Too .. This Is An Amazing Story & I Loveesh It Immensely : )) .. Now, To Da Sequel I Go!
7/12/2011 c18 PinkMyselfAndI
Loved it! Can't wait to read the sequel. Made me cry!
6/25/2011 c18 14BlackaddictReader
Aww I loved it! It took me a little over an hour to read the whole thing. It was beautiful.

Can't wait to read the sequel!
1/27/2011 c18 E.Cullen1901
this story was so amazing i cant even put it in words how much i loved it. you are an amazing writer :)
10/28/2010 c18 cinewardy
whaattt? it's end? my my my .. i love this story! i trully do hahahaha :))) you're awesome writer :P
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