for I Need You8/31/2019 c7 Guest
Lmao my man did the NaruHina genjutsu love realization BEFORE it became canon
Lmao my man did the NaruHina genjutsu love realization BEFORE it became canon
2/6/2014 c5 
7SKG100
My frikken crap
You did the cinnamon toast crunch bit.
As expected of you Lex,
As expected
7SKG100My frikken crap
You did the cinnamon toast crunch bit.
As expected of you Lex,
As expected
10/24/2013 c16 Guest
Why did u stooop?! :'((
Why did u stooop?! :'((
10/26/2012 c16 ranbo neal
This chapter was kind of filler...but interesting. I do like the story and sure hope that you continue...you told readers about your future plot earlier and it sure looks like a great one. Please keep going when you get time...they aren't even engaged yet! Oh,well...I've enjoyed the story so far. Thanks.
This chapter was kind of filler...but interesting. I do like the story and sure hope that you continue...you told readers about your future plot earlier and it sure looks like a great one. Please keep going when you get time...they aren't even engaged yet! Oh,well...I've enjoyed the story so far. Thanks.
10/26/2012 c15 ranbo neal
Wow! I looks like trouble is headed toward Naruto and Hinata and their plan to get married. A plot within the Hyuuga clan...and it involves Hinata's family. Great idea.
Wow! I looks like trouble is headed toward Naruto and Hinata and their plan to get married. A plot within the Hyuuga clan...and it involves Hinata's family. Great idea.
10/26/2012 c13 ranbo neal
Great chapter and Omake...you are really back on track in the story! Some great NaruHina romance and just fun dialogue taking place. Good idea for the omake.
Great chapter and Omake...you are really back on track in the story! Some great NaruHina romance and just fun dialogue taking place. Good idea for the omake.
10/26/2012 c12 ranbo neal
OH, NO! What Happened to Naruto and Hinata...they...and their love for each other are the central reason most readers are reading this story...why did a whole chapter go by without any reference to them. That is the first complaint I have had for your story...but this is a big one...forget Ino and Sai...I want to know if Hinata and Naruto are going to be allowed to be a couple...what about the Hyuuga clan's rules? You did lose your focus on your theme.
OH, NO! What Happened to Naruto and Hinata...they...and their love for each other are the central reason most readers are reading this story...why did a whole chapter go by without any reference to them. That is the first complaint I have had for your story...but this is a big one...forget Ino and Sai...I want to know if Hinata and Naruto are going to be allowed to be a couple...what about the Hyuuga clan's rules? You did lose your focus on your theme.
10/26/2012 c11 ranbo neal
I love the NaruHina romance fluff! This was a very cool chapter. I enjoyed the flashbacks.
I love the NaruHina romance fluff! This was a very cool chapter. I enjoyed the flashbacks.
10/26/2012 c10 ranbo neal
Great writing in a very romantic NaruHina chapter. This was just superb from beginning to end! I like the Naruto confession...and Hinata's reaction:) HOME RUN chapter.
Great writing in a very romantic NaruHina chapter. This was just superb from beginning to end! I like the Naruto confession...and Hinata's reaction:) HOME RUN chapter.
10/26/2012 c9 ranbo neal
Hinata is awesome in this chapter...great job...she is strong. Naruto was super too...he had a lot of different jutsu weapons to use...Hokage like! I like the cliffhanger type ending too.
Hinata is awesome in this chapter...great job...she is strong. Naruto was super too...he had a lot of different jutsu weapons to use...Hokage like! I like the cliffhanger type ending too.
10/26/2012 c8 ranbo neal
Another outstanding chapter...great job with the fight...eventhough Naruto is getting defeated...Hinata steps in. Great, epic scene.
Another outstanding chapter...great job with the fight...eventhough Naruto is getting defeated...Hinata steps in. Great, epic scene.
10/26/2012 c7 ranbo neal
Wow...a LOT of action and moving along of the plot all of the sudden in this chapter. Naruto is going to fight for Hinata...and she is headed for the battle area...good story!
Wow...a LOT of action and moving along of the plot all of the sudden in this chapter. Naruto is going to fight for Hinata...and she is headed for the battle area...good story!
10/26/2012 c6 ranbo neal
You got a little off track with the silly comment about Sasuke's underwear...it is almost like the story is rolling along and then you lost focus and got silly. Oh, well...good chapter besides that...everything else seemed to make sense. I like the fact that it is kind of building up to a tension point here...we will see how it turns out. Excellent story.
You got a little off track with the silly comment about Sasuke's underwear...it is almost like the story is rolling along and then you lost focus and got silly. Oh, well...good chapter besides that...everything else seemed to make sense. I like the fact that it is kind of building up to a tension point here...we will see how it turns out. Excellent story.