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2/22/2015 c2 3lala32903
Can you do one where he tries to become sephiroths minion?
And anyways, this story is funny.
2/10/2015 c2 18Shadewolf7
Cute. I suppose too many times around would drive ANYONE nuts enough to try to entertain themselves in unusual ways.
6/27/2013 c1 Bloody Eclipse
Hahaha. Someone should draw Cloud's outfit. I really want to see it.
6/17/2013 c2 2Lisa.P7
When is the next chapter?!
4/9/2013 c2 dalulzing
10/1/2012 c2 01 Deleted Junk Acc
Oh my GOD. AHAHAHA. Couldn't stop laughing, jesus fuck. So funny. Please put more Fail!Cloud in this
8/6/2012 c2 2Jonuts
Both chapters had me rolling around laughing. I extend to this story the Official Jonuts Seal of Approval(tm). HUZZAH!
7/26/2012 c2 1sunfun
Nice and funny.
2/29/2012 c2 8vodoodollz
Epic! Laughed my arse off... still laughing my arse off. Anyway, please update this too. :D I'm gonna go back and re-read this for the third time.
11/10/2011 c2 1River Flows Backwards
Ahahah! Holy shizz dude this is amazing! XD

Oh gawd... you evil genius you~ Best crack I've read yet! *pauses* okay, so I haven't read that much FF crack, but whatever, its still better than most other crack from the many fandoms I lurk around in ;)

Please: Update this thing because it is SO amazing, and... can I put this on my kindle? As well as Once more, With feeling...? Please? :)
10/22/2011 c1 Kyuuka
Oh god I'm still laughing just typing this. You know I bet Zack's the one who's been daring Cloud to do those things lol! The first Chapter totally had me cracking up! Leather and Sequins in eye watering colors lol. Ya gotta wonder what Cloud would have done if Sephiroth had taken his offer hehe.

A tank...hmmm it would probably blow up before getting their do to attacking creatures and rough terrain etc.

I can just imagine it

"Yo, chocobo-head I totally dare you to -insert dare- to Seph!" Long blank stare "Okay," what else is he supposed to do for entertainment hahaha.
9/5/2011 c2 25N.T. Embe
XD ...Cloud sounds a looooot like Dart in this fanfic. Don't mind me. Referencing other videogames that I happen to enjoy involving crossovers with. (Yay for Legend of Dragoon! XD)

AWESOME chapter yet again! I LOVE your writing style! It makes all this humor so much more believable and enjoyable! :D Absolutely great job! Though short, these are hilarious enough to amuse ANYONE. XD 333 I love it!
9/5/2011 c1 N.T. Embe

*Puts her stamp of approval on this fanfic* BRILLIANT. Oh my God... BRILLIANT.

Wonderful language, well developed setting and revealing through a fluid vocabulary, and yet... Pffft... PAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAAHA! POIGNANTLY HILARIOUS! 8'DDDDD 3333333333 EPIC. Absolutely, EPIC! XD
6/8/2011 c2 Do a Barrel Roll
Tanks could work...
5/10/2011 c2 solkatt
rofl, awesome ^_^
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