for If at First You Don’t Succeed4/9/2010 c2 
22Portrait of a Scribe
THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! *faves and alerts* I loved the first chapter, and this one was wonderful, as well! *giggle giggle giggle giggle*
22Portrait of a ScribeTHIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! *faves and alerts* I loved the first chapter, and this one was wonderful, as well! *giggle giggle giggle giggle*
4/5/2010 c2 17firedraygon
Hee, cute! I like how Sephiroth's just so confused at Cloud's nonchalant reaction to getting stabbed. XD; Looking forward to the next attempt!
~fd97
17firedraygonHee, cute! I like how Sephiroth's just so confused at Cloud's nonchalant reaction to getting stabbed. XD; Looking forward to the next attempt!
~fd97
3/18/2010 c2 ebil-kitty
Oh, man! XD
You did it again!
Reading this really helped lift my mood. Currently have some stress issues with work, ugh...
Sephiroth when not in his 'Holier than thou' attitude never cease to make me giggle! Especially in this case his reaction to Cloud's nearly complete disregard of having Masamune sticking into him XD
Looking forward to what else you'll come up with between Cloud and Sephiroth ^^
Oh, man! XD
You did it again!
Reading this really helped lift my mood. Currently have some stress issues with work, ugh...
Sephiroth when not in his 'Holier than thou' attitude never cease to make me giggle! Especially in this case his reaction to Cloud's nearly complete disregard of having Masamune sticking into him XD
Looking forward to what else you'll come up with between Cloud and Sephiroth ^^
3/1/2010 c2 36Silver Queen
The general cleared his throat deliberately, "Um… usually people scream and… die…when I do that."
This has to be one of the best lines ever. Seriously. It made me laugh so much.
36Silver QueenThe general cleared his throat deliberately, "Um… usually people scream and… die…when I do that."
This has to be one of the best lines ever. Seriously. It made me laugh so much.
2/28/2010 c2 kit572
Dear God that was brilliant! You made my day XD. What next Cloud ranting? Please update ASAP.
Dear God that was brilliant! You made my day XD. What next Cloud ranting? Please update ASAP.
2/27/2010 c2 9Hikari Kaiya
OH God! I needed that! I just got done reading a really sad two shot by Amarissia called Irreparable. So I needed a really amazing laugh! So I'm happy to say that I'm happy again! Can't wait to see what other things Cloud does.
Seph's reaction to Cloud being stabbed with Masamune was EPIC!
9Hikari KaiyaOH God! I needed that! I just got done reading a really sad two shot by Amarissia called Irreparable. So I needed a really amazing laugh! So I'm happy to say that I'm happy again! Can't wait to see what other things Cloud does.
Seph's reaction to Cloud being stabbed with Masamune was EPIC!
2/27/2010 c2 12Mystic 777
"I never get to finish that story" (Dies laughing). This is too funny. You mentioned guard-Cloud sleeping on the job, but what happened to Tifa? Still, this is awesome, the title if fun too. ^_^
12Mystic 777"I never get to finish that story" (Dies laughing). This is too funny. You mentioned guard-Cloud sleeping on the job, but what happened to Tifa? Still, this is awesome, the title if fun too. ^_^
2/27/2010 c2 FFVII
Aww, that was mean of Sephiroth to cut Cloud off like that... It was funny though (especially the terminator thing)
Aww, that was mean of Sephiroth to cut Cloud off like that... It was funny though (especially the terminator thing)
2/27/2010 c2 109Soyna
Oh! That was wonderful. Truly wonderful.
"Meh, … you get used to it really." That line got me snickering.
Maybe Zack should be forced to help, since he is getting so much amusement out of Cloud's attempts.
109SoynaOh! That was wonderful. Truly wonderful.
"Meh, … you get used to it really." That line got me snickering.
Maybe Zack should be forced to help, since he is getting so much amusement out of Cloud's attempts.
2/27/2010 c2 8Kibuka
Why do you use dang instead of damn? I've never understood why people do this (it's a pet peeve of mine in fact),when the intention behind both words is the same. There's nothing wrong with saying or writing the word damn; and substituting dang for the former smacks of an immaturity and or pretentiousness that takes away from an otherwise enjoyable little story. And I do enjoy this Groundhog-esk, neurotic/insane Cloud literary jaunt you've got going here.
8KibukaWhy do you use dang instead of damn? I've never understood why people do this (it's a pet peeve of mine in fact),when the intention behind both words is the same. There's nothing wrong with saying or writing the word damn; and substituting dang for the former smacks of an immaturity and or pretentiousness that takes away from an otherwise enjoyable little story. And I do enjoy this Groundhog-esk, neurotic/insane Cloud literary jaunt you've got going here.