for If at First You Don’t Succeed7/14/2009 c1 
11Serenity Reigns
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Up there is my dead face because I seriously have no words for this other than 'I think you've killed me'. This was brilliantly done and hilarious! Are you going to add another chapter? You know, to show what he does some of the other times when he gets sent back.
Anyway, this was great and I loved it!
11Serenity ReignsX X
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Up there is my dead face because I seriously have no words for this other than 'I think you've killed me'. This was brilliantly done and hilarious! Are you going to add another chapter? You know, to show what he does some of the other times when he gets sent back.
Anyway, this was great and I loved it!
7/14/2009 c1 green-road
OMG! That was soo funny! Usually Cloud so serious, but after living for so long and x amount of times anyone would calm down...I guess was getting bored with all of that travelling to back stuff!
OMG! That was soo funny! Usually Cloud so serious, but after living for so long and x amount of times anyone would calm down...I guess was getting bored with all of that travelling to back stuff!
7/14/2009 c1 A Third Full
Well this was certainly a gut buster. I really couldn't stop laughing. Great humor, yeah?
Well this was certainly a gut buster. I really couldn't stop laughing. Great humor, yeah?
7/14/2009 c1 9Rhathymia
Because of this, I now pledge to you my everlasting love. M. Yes.
Omygosh Cloud... the mental images... I don't know whether to squeal in pain, or fangirl.
"Who knew?" Love the way that line was delivered!
I'm trying to figure out what to say, but mostly just flailing in my desk chair D= Suffice to say that this was amazing, and totally looking forward to more =D
9RhathymiaBecause of this, I now pledge to you my everlasting love. M. Yes.
Omygosh Cloud... the mental images... I don't know whether to squeal in pain, or fangirl.
"Who knew?" Love the way that line was delivered!
I'm trying to figure out what to say, but mostly just flailing in my desk chair D= Suffice to say that this was amazing, and totally looking forward to more =D
7/13/2009 c1 13Oreramar
OhmygodohmygodohmygodhedidNOT!
Bad
bad bad bad bad bad
AHH, MY MENTAL EYES!
Still...
Creative. :)
Definitely NOT something I can see Cloud doing, but then, if he's been sent back to try again often enough...
Why do I think Zack had something to do with the planning of this little...experiment?
Sephiroth's not gay.
So did the conclusion support or deny the hypothesis?
I loved Seph's reaction to that...horrible, horrible spectacle. KILL IT! KILLITKILLITKILLIT!
The pain must have been tremendous for Cloud. Whether you've already died a thousand times or no, it can't get that much better each time.
On the upside, I expect that image is burned forever in Sephiroth's poor, mad mind. Heh.
I'm going to go and make sure it's not burned into my own mind now.
Oh, and as a PS: storie and I might be late reviewing next chapter of Once More, With Feeling. This next weekend we'll be visiting relatives, and internet access is doubtful.
So if you update really early in the morning and we stay up until you do, we might be able to catch it. If we don't, however...well, that's why.
13OreramarOhmygodohmygodohmygodhedidNOT!
Bad
bad bad bad bad bad
AHH, MY MENTAL EYES!
Still...
Creative. :)
Definitely NOT something I can see Cloud doing, but then, if he's been sent back to try again often enough...
Why do I think Zack had something to do with the planning of this little...experiment?
Sephiroth's not gay.
So did the conclusion support or deny the hypothesis?
I loved Seph's reaction to that...horrible, horrible spectacle. KILL IT! KILLITKILLITKILLIT!
The pain must have been tremendous for Cloud. Whether you've already died a thousand times or no, it can't get that much better each time.
On the upside, I expect that image is burned forever in Sephiroth's poor, mad mind. Heh.
I'm going to go and make sure it's not burned into my own mind now.
Oh, and as a PS: storie and I might be late reviewing next chapter of Once More, With Feeling. This next weekend we'll be visiting relatives, and internet access is doubtful.
So if you update really early in the morning and we stay up until you do, we might be able to catch it. If we don't, however...well, that's why.