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11/21/2012 c1 21Amakatsu
Do I have to repeat what other reviews have said? ;p
It was so perfect and that one sentence got it going. I think I loved this more than a 3 chapter story I just read, did I mention that it was awesome?
8/24/2009 c1 xXSharks are SexyXx
The vagueness worked, and you expressed it in less than 100 words-wonderful job :3 I can never keep my stories short and to-the-point.
8/7/2009 c1 86Yuri-hime
Incredibly short...but nice =3
7/26/2009 c1 Ashley
That was adorable!
7/16/2009 c1 45shelter
The prose is well-controlled & the ideas are just staring me there in the face. You should be commended for trying to say/convey so much in less than 100 words.

Vague content & generalized vocabulary aside (there's no real indication what is it that Tatsuki did), it's a good effort at telling readers that, yes, sometimes less can be more.

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