
11/14/2012 c1 Guest
please update
please update
8/1/2009 c1 typos galor
u need to do some proof reading and fix some spelling:)..but other than that i like story.
u need to do some proof reading and fix some spelling:)..but other than that i like story.
7/20/2009 c1
2DarkangelGuard77
okay i like the idea of the story but ur writins a bit rough? still good though :D keep it up i behind u all the way !

okay i like the idea of the story but ur writins a bit rough? still good though :D keep it up i behind u all the way !
7/15/2009 c1
37Fury Cutter
Finally after months of antisipation the first chapter is up.
Like I said before this is a nice starting point, it catches the readers attention and has them intrested in whats coming next.
Anyway hope the next chapter will be up soon and if you want to send me anything feel free.

Finally after months of antisipation the first chapter is up.
Like I said before this is a nice starting point, it catches the readers attention and has them intrested in whats coming next.
Anyway hope the next chapter will be up soon and if you want to send me anything feel free.