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11/13/2021 c22 Nutellagirl
Hi, this fanfiction is the best. Will you complete this fanfiction in future?
2/15/2014 c22 154Aubrie1234
What is going to happen to Paul? What will Dawn do? And please continue the story. I haven't seen Drew and May for a while, either. I think you should put them in the next chapter or the one after it.
4/14/2013 c5 Guest
thanks for this story it was a great one about true love
12/15/2012 c22 lizzy
are you going to write more chapters because i want to read more of this story.
11/26/2012 c5 nicole
be's mean to Dawn. Lost to the one of the battle arena and is up to a rematch and daesn't know why he's acting weird around dawn.
11/26/2012 c1 Guest
is this real
11/26/2012 c2 Guest
it's supposed it be discharge not you discharge
8/14/2012 c18 3LunarKitten1029
cool
6/12/2012 c22 1Ikari Angel
OMG! THIS STORY IS BEAST! I LOVE IT! keep wrighting it please :)
5/4/2012 c22 Guest
Is there any more
4/12/2012 c22 12PandaMonium1218
Verry good :) i like the battles :D update soon
3/21/2012 c4 Amy47101
Contests are pretty hard for me to, but here's some advice. Think up your own moves! I realized that it's way easier to describe your own ideas than some one else's! You could even invent your own pokemon attach moves! That's some of my pretty good contest advice. You could also try a time laps and fastforword to the final battle with the main character in it. Keep writing! ;D
8/5/2011 c22 givemethequietlife
Update soon please?
7/17/2011 c22 15mednin
:O I wasn't expecting that! I liked it, though I don't think Dawn was being mean and sarcastic by giving him the rock, that part I didn't like. Everything else is pretty good. Thanks for updating! ^^
7/17/2011 c22 1HUGE pokefan
Great chapter! Although one thing, Torterra kinda fainted twice. ^_^'
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