
6/16/2020 c18 Andi
Maravilloso! Estoy llorando demaciado ame la historia y es definitivamente mi favorita. Gracias!
Maravilloso! Estoy llorando demaciado ame la historia y es definitivamente mi favorita. Gracias!
3/10/2020 c18
3jesscaw04
I just finished this, after spending several days at work reading it surreptitiously lol. It was so wonderful, and I really felt everything that they went through. Just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed it all these years later :)

I just finished this, after spending several days at work reading it surreptitiously lol. It was so wonderful, and I really felt everything that they went through. Just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed it all these years later :)
10/7/2019 c9 Guest
Oh god. Don't do it Brennan
Oh god. Don't do it Brennan
10/7/2019 c3 Guest
Ohhh I'm just waiting for them to be reunited, so she will be ok
Ohhh I'm just waiting for them to be reunited, so she will be ok
10/7/2019 c1 Guest
Wow, really cool storyline. I've always wondered about those weeks, in the show, where she thought he was dead.
You catch the tone of the show/Brennan really well :)
Wow, really cool storyline. I've always wondered about those weeks, in the show, where she thought he was dead.
You catch the tone of the show/Brennan really well :)
7/1/2019 c18 XoX.Chris.XoX
Wow. That was one amazing story. The last chapter had me crying like a broken tap. You're an amazing writer and I hope you carry on creating these wonderful fics. Well done x
Wow. That was one amazing story. The last chapter had me crying like a broken tap. You're an amazing writer and I hope you carry on creating these wonderful fics. Well done x
12/9/2018 c18
5Dark Mind and Saddened Soul
Far out... I have a huge lump of emotion in my throat thanks to this story, it was awesome. Thank yiiu for writing it.
DMSS

Far out... I have a huge lump of emotion in my throat thanks to this story, it was awesome. Thank yiiu for writing it.
DMSS
9/1/2018 c15
14Aliceoflegend
Heya, i love your story so far, just a little heads up:at the start of the chapter you have brennan checking booth's wrist pulse point with her thumb. That's actually inaccurate, as you have a pulse point in your tumb as well so there's a risk that, in trying to measure someone else's pulse, you may actually just be tracking your own. With her vast medical knowledge, brennan would be aware of this, thus would use the more accepted two fingers approach. She may also be better inclined to measure from the neck, but i understand if you chose the wrist for the sake of stealth!
Hope this has been helpful and hasn't offended your in any way, i love the fic and can't wait to see how it ends!
Alice x

Heya, i love your story so far, just a little heads up:at the start of the chapter you have brennan checking booth's wrist pulse point with her thumb. That's actually inaccurate, as you have a pulse point in your tumb as well so there's a risk that, in trying to measure someone else's pulse, you may actually just be tracking your own. With her vast medical knowledge, brennan would be aware of this, thus would use the more accepted two fingers approach. She may also be better inclined to measure from the neck, but i understand if you chose the wrist for the sake of stealth!
Hope this has been helpful and hasn't offended your in any way, i love the fic and can't wait to see how it ends!
Alice x
4/8/2018 c3 regbride12
OMG please do not say Brennan wants to end her life? Booth is ALIVE! She doesn't know that!
The lake and now the mountain :( this is too much to watch her going through...
OMG please do not say Brennan wants to end her life? Booth is ALIVE! She doesn't know that!
The lake and now the mountain :( this is too much to watch her going through...
4/8/2018 c2 regbride12
Dying, Brennan is killing me...she is so hurt...I am so grateful they all wanted their characters to be left alive during the series run and finale. Bawled my eyes out for 3 of the major recurring characters (won't say who in case people are new like I was in 2016)...would have lost it big time had it been Booth or Brennan :'( really any of the major characters :(
Booth doesn't know for sure about Brennan? Like I said, he will hurt people!
Brennan in Booths apartment, seeing Parker, her gifts from Booth, photos, etc...very realistic the actions and emotions Brennan is going thru and experiencing.
Angela needs to keep being there for her little sister.
Dying, Brennan is killing me...she is so hurt...I am so grateful they all wanted their characters to be left alive during the series run and finale. Bawled my eyes out for 3 of the major recurring characters (won't say who in case people are new like I was in 2016)...would have lost it big time had it been Booth or Brennan :'( really any of the major characters :(
Booth doesn't know for sure about Brennan? Like I said, he will hurt people!
Brennan in Booths apartment, seeing Parker, her gifts from Booth, photos, etc...very realistic the actions and emotions Brennan is going thru and experiencing.
Angela needs to keep being there for her little sister.