for Z Story9/13/2015 c16 Rebellion Dragon
If you make a sequel, or if you already have, I would and/or will read it! I loved this story so much, I couldn't put my phone down to sleep. And when I did sleep, I dreamt about it. Crazy huh? Thank you for writing this.
If you make a sequel, or if you already have, I would and/or will read it! I loved this story so much, I couldn't put my phone down to sleep. And when I did sleep, I dreamt about it. Crazy huh? Thank you for writing this.
9/8/2015 c6 Guest
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8/25/2015 c6 GHOSTWHISPER69
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8/14/2015 c16 
1DarkPurpleTomBoy
OMG i just loved your story! I hope you can do a squeal cause i bet it would be awesome!
1DarkPurpleTomBoyOMG i just loved your story! I hope you can do a squeal cause i bet it would be awesome!
1/7/2015 c16 Blackcat
I really loved this story all he cliff hanger and the part where they had to deal with the ppnkg and the rrckb. judt great but nothing perfect.
9/10
I really loved this story all he cliff hanger and the part where they had to deal with the ppnkg and the rrckb. judt great but nothing perfect.
9/10
7/5/2014 c13 Guest
HATE IT !
HATE IT !
4/27/2014 c1 3Sarfire
I loved your story.i read it multiply time.i just start my story and have writers block. ANY HINTS?
3SarfireI loved your story.i read it multiply time.i just start my story and have writers block. ANY HINTS?
4/27/2014 c1 Guest
I loved how you did the story. I just started one ,but I get my inspiration from you. That you!
I loved how you did the story. I just started one ,but I get my inspiration from you. That you!
4/16/2014 c16 Opal
DUDE when I saw this was a AN I got MAD because I really enjoyed this story and was hoping it will be continued and still do. But if you do a sequel I will be happy because its a way to continue this story and PLEASE make the story long and NONE or barely any short chapters PLEASE. PLEASE!
DUDE when I saw this was a AN I got MAD because I really enjoyed this story and was hoping it will be continued and still do. But if you do a sequel I will be happy because its a way to continue this story and PLEASE make the story long and NONE or barely any short chapters PLEASE. PLEASE!
4/14/2014 c16 nerezzapsycho
i loved it can u please write a sequel? pretty please ur writing is awesome and i really want to know what happens next
i loved it can u please write a sequel? pretty please ur writing is awesome and i really want to know what happens next
4/12/2014 c15 I3 Buttercup
Hey honnyabee,how do you make one of these? I would love to make one. I really liked yours,and a lot of the others to. you all work hard on making things like this,so trust me when I say, SOMEONE out there (mainly me! :-) is REALLY happy you made this. I'm planning on being a writer,so it would really help if I knew how to make one of these. please respond. I really want YOU to read what I have. It may not be the same,but it would be copying,so of course its not the same. I'm making my own story about 5 girls,Sandra(red leader) Saara (blue) Seriina (me,green) Sona (white) Star(black,sorta evil) Their "counterparts" are Shane (red boy leader) Sky (blue boy) Sherlock!(green boy) Syd(his actual name is Sydney,white boy) Scot (black boy,alao sorta evil) please tell me what ya think! Bu-bye!
Hey honnyabee,how do you make one of these? I would love to make one. I really liked yours,and a lot of the others to. you all work hard on making things like this,so trust me when I say, SOMEONE out there (mainly me! :-) is REALLY happy you made this. I'm planning on being a writer,so it would really help if I knew how to make one of these. please respond. I really want YOU to read what I have. It may not be the same,but it would be copying,so of course its not the same. I'm making my own story about 5 girls,Sandra(red leader) Saara (blue) Seriina (me,green) Sona (white) Star(black,sorta evil) Their "counterparts" are Shane (red boy leader) Sky (blue boy) Sherlock!(green boy) Syd(his actual name is Sydney,white boy) Scot (black boy,alao sorta evil) please tell me what ya think! Bu-bye!
3/30/2014 c16 missteartea04
Oh btw you did a very weird mistake Boomer's P.O.V but...it was like you forgot cause it was "I love you boomer!" like boomer liked another guy named boomer and all...cause it was said like it was still miya's P.O.V soooo...
Oh btw you did a very weird mistake Boomer's P.O.V but...it was like you forgot cause it was "I love you boomer!" like boomer liked another guy named boomer and all...cause it was said like it was still miya's P.O.V soooo...