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11/20/2010 c6 7Very Small Prophet
I hate James Potter. Even when he's being a decent human being, I hate him. It must be the irrational Sev-fangirl in me.

If only Lily had spoken to Sev FIRST, and forgiven him for real. Forgiveness doesn't count if you don't tell the forgive-ee, you cold, heartless girl! You threw him to the Death Eaters, and how you complain because they caught him. You don't deserve the life-long devotion of his poor wounded heart.

I did mention something about being an irrational Sev-fangirl, didn't? ;-)
11/20/2010 c6 Cassandra30
Still waiting for an update.
11/20/2010 c5 Cassandra30
Good chapter.
11/20/2010 c4 Cassandra30
Lily, go make up with Severus, please!
11/20/2010 c3 Cassandra30
Really I do feel sorry for that boy but he brought it on himself. All he needed to do was befriend her friend not try to get rid of him.
11/20/2010 c2 Cassandra30
Bittersweet. So sad.
11/20/2010 c1 Cassandra30
Excellent start! sigh Lily, did you have any idea of the havoc you were wreaking?
8/13/2009 c6 38loveislouder94
Don't worry about not updating, its understandable, what with how busy life can get...

Maybe put a bit of Snape in the next chapter...
8/13/2009 c4 loveislouder94
Great way to end the chapter, leaving the readers hanging... :)
8/13/2009 c3 loveislouder94
The chapters aren't too short, they're fine, in my opnion.

Good characterization.
8/13/2009 c2 loveislouder94
A very interesting, enjoyable story. :)
7/27/2009 c5 319Ashe86
wow.. good story so far.. Im still rooting for snevans though XD
7/26/2009 c5 3GinnyFan5
NO! XD please write more soon. I really want to know what happens with Snape. it's a great story!
7/26/2009 c1 GinnyFan5
aaww! the last two sentances want to make me cry! *sniff*
7/22/2009 c4 arr23
this was great. update soon!
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