
11/20/2010 c6
7Very Small Prophet
I hate James Potter. Even when he's being a decent human being, I hate him. It must be the irrational Sev-fangirl in me.
If only Lily had spoken to Sev FIRST, and forgiven him for real. Forgiveness doesn't count if you don't tell the forgive-ee, you cold, heartless girl! You threw him to the Death Eaters, and how you complain because they caught him. You don't deserve the life-long devotion of his poor wounded heart.
I did mention something about being an irrational Sev-fangirl, didn't? ;-)

I hate James Potter. Even when he's being a decent human being, I hate him. It must be the irrational Sev-fangirl in me.
If only Lily had spoken to Sev FIRST, and forgiven him for real. Forgiveness doesn't count if you don't tell the forgive-ee, you cold, heartless girl! You threw him to the Death Eaters, and how you complain because they caught him. You don't deserve the life-long devotion of his poor wounded heart.
I did mention something about being an irrational Sev-fangirl, didn't? ;-)
11/20/2010 c3 Cassandra30
Really I do feel sorry for that boy but he brought it on himself. All he needed to do was befriend her friend not try to get rid of him.
Really I do feel sorry for that boy but he brought it on himself. All he needed to do was befriend her friend not try to get rid of him.
11/20/2010 c1 Cassandra30
Excellent start! sigh Lily, did you have any idea of the havoc you were wreaking?
Excellent start! sigh Lily, did you have any idea of the havoc you were wreaking?
8/13/2009 c6
38loveislouder94
Don't worry about not updating, its understandable, what with how busy life can get...
Maybe put a bit of Snape in the next chapter...

Don't worry about not updating, its understandable, what with how busy life can get...
Maybe put a bit of Snape in the next chapter...
8/13/2009 c3 loveislouder94
The chapters aren't too short, they're fine, in my opnion.
Good characterization.
The chapters aren't too short, they're fine, in my opnion.
Good characterization.