for WWFD3/6/2010 c1 alphafashionista
OMG thats the best story i have ever read! it my be better than J.K Rowling's harry potter books! then again if it were not for her you would not have wrote this super cool, wonderful,loving, and humorus sotry! good job and good work! keep it up! plz write more often! and add more chapters to it!
Good job lizzy!
OMG thats the best story i have ever read! it my be better than J.K Rowling's harry potter books! then again if it were not for her you would not have wrote this super cool, wonderful,loving, and humorus sotry! good job and good work! keep it up! plz write more often! and add more chapters to it!
Good job lizzy!
7/25/2009 c3 
1Thydude
I am both slightly disappointed and relieved. Slightly disappointed because of what it might of been. Relieved because this was a really good one shot and I don't know if it would be plausible to live up to the standards you had set. Good decision on your part. I'll vote for the sequel all the way though. Goodbye until next time.
1ThydudeI am both slightly disappointed and relieved. Slightly disappointed because of what it might of been. Relieved because this was a really good one shot and I don't know if it would be plausible to live up to the standards you had set. Good decision on your part. I'll vote for the sequel all the way though. Goodbye until next time.
7/19/2009 c1 2LittleMissEvans
this was great! this is how george should be after the war! this was amazing! plzplz write more!
2LittleMissEvansthis was great! this is how george should be after the war! this was amazing! plzplz write more!
7/19/2009 c1 1Thydude
This story was really well written. There were no grammar or spelling mistakes that I saw. I believe you did the memorial service almost perfectly. I think the Fred visiting George scene was a good idea also. As far as continuing this story, I'm not sure. If you think you can make a plot line and make it as intriguing as this (at the moment) one shot, then why not. If you continue this I'll continue to read it, if you don't so be it.
1ThydudeThis story was really well written. There were no grammar or spelling mistakes that I saw. I believe you did the memorial service almost perfectly. I think the Fred visiting George scene was a good idea also. As far as continuing this story, I'm not sure. If you think you can make a plot line and make it as intriguing as this (at the moment) one shot, then why not. If you continue this I'll continue to read it, if you don't so be it.
7/19/2009 c1 3Thr girlzzzz
Wow this is so good. This made Audry think about what she would do if she lost her twin sister Nicole and she decided grive for a little, decide that Nikki would want her to cheer up and cheer up the people who were still sad. She is now crying thinking about Nikki being gone.
3Thr girlzzzzWow this is so good. This made Audry think about what she would do if she lost her twin sister Nicole and she decided grive for a little, decide that Nikki would want her to cheer up and cheer up the people who were still sad. She is now crying thinking about Nikki being gone.