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2/7/2010 c1 1derpface123
XD my oc is named hikari! cuz dat means light
2/7/2010 c7 derpface123
omg i love dish u shud write a sequel! xD
11/27/2009 c7 007
I am astonished at how many errors are in here.Like first Sora is in Twilight Town,Then Ariel (who should be underwater) appears then bam he is in port royal.And why are there no quotations when they speak.Plus the metaphors make like the wolf metaphor was used weakly.Plus sentences were runons it was something similar to this happend.Guy got up.Guy opened door.Guy entered door.
7/23/2009 c1 7NinjaSheik
Wow...

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