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12/6/2009 c1 19IceSnowAndGlamour
OK I need to put you on my alert function so I know when you have something up! That was just great, it was very dreamlike.

"Remus traces poems onto Sirius’ arms and thighs, and his handwriting must be terrible because he can’t see anything, and Sirius says he loves him because they are sixteen and life already feels like it might be passing them by."

This last passage is amazing.
11/3/2009 c1 22rry
this... uh... this is... wow. *giggles* this read more like poetry than prose and, just, wow. it's really amazing. like, REALY amazing, for being so short but it turns out... really perfect. i really like the feel of it. it's... i'm really at quite a loss for words. it's, whoa.
7/21/2009 c1 1ALEXipharmic
that was beautiful...

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