
9/16/2020 c36 Guest
Are you going to update?
Are you going to update?
1/19/2020 c15 Aelinnight
Am so late in reading this fanfiction but XD am cracking up our your poem. Genius!
Am so late in reading this fanfiction but XD am cracking up our your poem. Genius!
9/19/2019 c18
1vampirelady13
Alice and Jasper suck how could they tell Bella to forgive her attempted murder. Wow are they stupid or just have no feelings. Spineless Bella showing her true colors once again. I don't even think Bella in the books was this spineless. Really she wants the Cullens kids to ok with Esme she keeps more stupid by the moment. Esme can cry all she wants there is excuses good enough to murder a child or anyone for that matter. Esme blaming on being human is disgusting.

Alice and Jasper suck how could they tell Bella to forgive her attempted murder. Wow are they stupid or just have no feelings. Spineless Bella showing her true colors once again. I don't even think Bella in the books was this spineless. Really she wants the Cullens kids to ok with Esme she keeps more stupid by the moment. Esme can cry all she wants there is excuses good enough to murder a child or anyone for that matter. Esme blaming on being human is disgusting.
9/19/2019 c16 vampirelady13
Wow she really didn't mourned for her parents. Sorry but I can't be live Bella is bad ass she to me is spineless. Also you have her being a shield in the last chapter in this one she has different powers what the hell. Also you sit at a table not on the table.
Wow she really didn't mourned for her parents. Sorry but I can't be live Bella is bad ass she to me is spineless. Also you have her being a shield in the last chapter in this one she has different powers what the hell. Also you sit at a table not on the table.
9/19/2019 c15 vampirelady13
15 years old to me is to young. Really Bella is just ok with what he did. Bella is an idiot. Aro is being cruel about not telling Bella about her parents. I bet when she finds out about her parents her spineless ass will be fine with it. Obviously she is the kind of girl to back down she just did.
15 years old to me is to young. Really Bella is just ok with what he did. Bella is an idiot. Aro is being cruel about not telling Bella about her parents. I bet when she finds out about her parents her spineless ass will be fine with it. Obviously she is the kind of girl to back down she just did.
9/19/2019 c14 vampirelady13
Jumping off a cliff is to good for her she needs to go to prison. No offence but I don't like Bella hair color or height still picturing her like the books there is nothing wrong with her hair color in the book.
Jumping off a cliff is to good for her she needs to go to prison. No offence but I don't like Bella hair color or height still picturing her like the books there is nothing wrong with her hair color in the book.
3/18/2019 c12 Isla
OMG! Jonathan Christopher as in JC as in Jace! Wayland/Lightwood/Morgenstern/Herondale! and then Clary as in Clarissa! Fray/Fairchild/Morgenstern!
OMG! Jonathan Christopher as in JC as in Jace! Wayland/Lightwood/Morgenstern/Herondale! and then Clary as in Clarissa! Fray/Fairchild/Morgenstern!
12/30/2018 c36 The Sorceress of Life
Hi, I was wondering if you're gonna continue this or is the story finished because I love the story and I would love it if she met up with her father and step-mother.
Hi, I was wondering if you're gonna continue this or is the story finished because I love the story and I would love it if she met up with her father and step-mother.
12/19/2016 c8
13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Noooo. Having it be an Edward and Bella story just ruined it. I hate Edward. You should tag him too if it's that pairing. Then people who don't like Edward pairings can skip it.

Noooo. Having it be an Edward and Bella story just ruined it. I hate Edward. You should tag him too if it's that pairing. Then people who don't like Edward pairings can skip it.
9/10/2016 c18 OllyOllyOxycodone
I wanted to read this because of its original plot, but the dialogue is so... immature? Most of the main characters have been around for around a century but still talk like they're fifteen, which in turn makes any of the drama feel like high school drama.
What I am trying to say is this. It has a very interesting plot but the childish dialogue can't support this type of story.
I wanted to read this because of its original plot, but the dialogue is so... immature? Most of the main characters have been around for around a century but still talk like they're fifteen, which in turn makes any of the drama feel like high school drama.
What I am trying to say is this. It has a very interesting plot but the childish dialogue can't support this type of story.
6/19/2016 c15 TwiHardSlayer
Don't think I didn't notice the teehee!fan of Ryan Higa bruh?
-TwiHardSlayer on wattpad
Don't think I didn't notice the teehee!fan of Ryan Higa bruh?
-TwiHardSlayer on wattpad