for Crimson Red11/25/2009 c1 Born 2 B A Vampire
you do relise that into the second to thirdparagraph, or somewhere around there alice called bella bella instead of elesibith and she didnt even try to take it back and bella didnt call her out on it
you do relise that into the second to thirdparagraph, or somewhere around there alice called bella bella instead of elesibith and she didnt even try to take it back and bella didnt call her out on it
8/18/2009 c5 
3Flutterbypav
You could have it like a meeting in the hose and then Edward taking Bella some where oh them wanting to know the whole truthd maybe?
3FlutterbypavYou could have it like a meeting in the hose and then Edward taking Bella some where oh them wanting to know the whole truthd maybe?
8/12/2009 c4 tidyKat
wow this is awesome! i can't wait to find out what on earth Bella is! :D keep up the amazing writing.. the word choice is impecable and has me addicted. please update asap! :)
wow this is awesome! i can't wait to find out what on earth Bella is! :D keep up the amazing writing.. the word choice is impecable and has me addicted. please update asap! :)
7/22/2009 c3 7twilightxsoccer15
its pretty good but its easier to read when you use quotation marks so we can tell when someone is talking
7twilightxsoccer15its pretty good but its easier to read when you use quotation marks so we can tell when someone is talking