
7/16/2017 c10 Ivy
Please continue to update! Is a great story... i hope to know what happen next!
Please continue to update! Is a great story... i hope to know what happen next!
1/7/2017 c2 Guest
Bro if you're writing a story in English WHY are you putting Japanese words in here? More insulting is that you clearly don't speak Japanese so pick a fucking language and stick to it
Bro if you're writing a story in English WHY are you putting Japanese words in here? More insulting is that you clearly don't speak Japanese so pick a fucking language and stick to it
8/24/2012 c5 niki
OHHHHHHHH. THE SUNSPENCE.
OHHHHHHHH. THE SUNSPENCE.
7/23/2012 c7 japanesestudier
it's niku not miku... Niku is meat... by the way... great story! enjoying it so far!
it's niku not miku... Niku is meat... by the way... great story! enjoying it so far!
6/16/2012 c10
8ForbiddenLeo
So I finally got aorund to reading this update! Nice job bringing it back to several chapters. I'm still dying to know about why Doflamingo wants Zoro!

So I finally got aorund to reading this update! Nice job bringing it back to several chapters. I'm still dying to know about why Doflamingo wants Zoro!
3/19/2012 c1
6DawnoftheNutter
...wakata means understood, not thank goodness (Don't trust google or bing translators)...but that is really besides the point. Good job~

...wakata means understood, not thank goodness (Don't trust google or bing translators)...but that is really besides the point. Good job~
8/25/2011 c6 DawnoftheNutter
Meat is NIKU not miku (that's a girl's name). Other than that, pretty good.
Meat is NIKU not miku (that's a girl's name). Other than that, pretty good.
7/2/2011 c2
5Red Voident Dragon
I-i knew it! I so knew it was that damned Doflamingo! xD Ah great story, loved reading both chapters. I hope this isn't discontinued. :D

I-i knew it! I so knew it was that damned Doflamingo! xD Ah great story, loved reading both chapters. I hope this isn't discontinued. :D
1/12/2011 c9 DD
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/31/2010 c9
8ForbiddenLeo
Wow. I think i love you :D
Just kidding but I love this story so much... Expecially chapter 2. That ending was just, amazing. And now I can't get over how much I love this story :) Can't wait for Doflamingo to return!

Wow. I think i love you :D
Just kidding but I love this story so much... Expecially chapter 2. That ending was just, amazing. And now I can't get over how much I love this story :) Can't wait for Doflamingo to return!
10/24/2010 c2 LuckyKiss
I could have your babies. Right now. Just for writing this :D
I really like your OC, but it feel slike she doesn't have a defined character and that she jumps around a lot personality wise.
Anyyyywaaaaayyysss, I agree with the person above me, I hope we get to Doflamingo and Zoro again, in a non-yaoi way :D
I could have your babies. Right now. Just for writing this :D
I really like your OC, but it feel slike she doesn't have a defined character and that she jumps around a lot personality wise.
Anyyyywaaaaayyysss, I agree with the person above me, I hope we get to Doflamingo and Zoro again, in a non-yaoi way :D
10/24/2010 c9 Zoro lova
So I'm like, in lvoe with this story. I really can't wait to get back to doflamingo and zoro! Update soon!
So I'm like, in lvoe with this story. I really can't wait to get back to doflamingo and zoro! Update soon!
8/10/2010 c9 distanceincrowdedrooms
i normally don't like reading fanfics with an oc joining the crew, but i really grew to like sora :) hope u update soon :)
i normally don't like reading fanfics with an oc joining the crew, but i really grew to like sora :) hope u update soon :)