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12/14/2010 c9 Shawna3
I'm just finished chappy nine... My heart pounding out of my chest... I decided to take a break to review to give my rapid breathing time to slow to normal pace. Anyway, it's amazing! I love this story. But there is room for improvement. Here is some ideas; A proofreader, a beta-reader or too, and a dictionary. A dictionary because some descriptions are kind of plain. But with synnonims (I so spelled that wrong) and other words that basically mean the same thing can give it more... Wait for it... PIZZAZ! Oh my gosh I'm so lame! Anyway, amazing story, close to perfect. 9 1/2 out of 10! Time to read chappy 10!
8/16/2009 c12 3northleftsouth
Great job. Reading this was like envisioning the wizard version of Law and Order. Especially since it concluded with a very subtle yet peculairly mysterious cliffhanger. I'm glad I didn't have to wait for the story to be updated before I read the ending.
8/16/2009 c9 5alwayssonnyalways
Wow a cliffhanger! At least I can read on! If I couldn't and had to wait for chapter 10 I'd freak out!

Thanks for the review, don't forget to check out some of my other stories!
8/12/2009 c12 17mrf18
I loved this story! The ending I kinda expected more from the ending but oh well!
8/11/2009 c12 4Fan of the toons
What a great ending to an equally great story!
8/7/2009 c12 5CyWiz
Aw! That's my reaction to the ending. I knew it! And I swear I didn't read ahead either! Very nice story with an good ending! Now you have more time for your other story!
8/7/2009 c11 CyWiz
Sorry I was so busy these past few days that I didn't have time to read and review! I am thinking she will not want her powers back for the safety reasons.
8/7/2009 c1 3phoebe-mayxxx4
that was verey gd
8/7/2009 c12 13CanadianReba
yay, awesome ending. I love the story.
8/4/2009 c10 5CyWiz
Yeah I figured it wasn't much of an ending! But very exciting! And I KNEW there was going to be final battle! I hope the Sam gets his butt kicked! Update fast!
8/4/2009 c10 17mrf18
OMG! YOU UPDATED. This story is so good!
8/3/2009 c10 selena
omg this is the best story so far ... i hate you for having this kind a talent
7/31/2009 c9 5CyWiz
Suspense! Uh oh, I just knew thunder means something is going to happen! Hope somebody hears her and comes help! Update please!
7/31/2009 c9 4lovelydasom
AH OH NO! lol. this one was good. i like how she "accidentally" said mom. :D and falling asleep on her mommy's shoulder. i like P
7/31/2009 c9 17mrf18
Very good. Update soon.

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