for Detention and Lemons5/13/2018 c1 Guest
IT IS SO FUNNY
IT IS SO FUNNY
10/11/2013 c1 Aaliyah Taylor
Awwwwwe, soo cute! Thnx 4 writing this and the lemon flavored candy part was sooo cute and funny. I like cute fluff, too!
Awwwwwe, soo cute! Thnx 4 writing this and the lemon flavored candy part was sooo cute and funny. I like cute fluff, too!
3/11/2013 c1 Guest
Haha lemon candy
Haha lemon candy
2/25/2013 c1 Judy
Hi, I have been reading fan fictions of this couple for awhile now :) I found myself wondering at each that something was missing or it was a bit too traumatizing to read and then I came across yours This story is perfect I love it so much :3 and I really thank you for putting it here Please continue to write great stories and next time I hope they'll be longer :3
Hi, I have been reading fan fictions of this couple for awhile now :) I found myself wondering at each that something was missing or it was a bit too traumatizing to read and then I came across yours This story is perfect I love it so much :3 and I really thank you for putting it here Please continue to write great stories and next time I hope they'll be longer :3
11/3/2009 c1 X-tsuki-no-bara-x
Love fun stories like this n_n not too long or deep, (just realized how wrong that sounds-) but always good from start to end. (that too actually- jesus, so much innuendo potential!)
Cool x :P
Love fun stories like this n_n not too long or deep, (just realized how wrong that sounds-) but always good from start to end. (that too actually- jesus, so much innuendo potential!)
Cool x :P
8/13/2009 c1 
9mochiusagi
haha that was great! geez riku and risa have really perverted minds, but who can blame them? the sounds coming from the door were very suggestive. ^.^
9mochiusagihaha that was great! geez riku and risa have really perverted minds, but who can blame them? the sounds coming from the door were very suggestive. ^.^
8/6/2009 c1 1TheBewingedWolf
Loved it all! When i thourgh if couldn't get better, if got even better! XD I hold my breath for avile.. 3 And I laught a lot! XD I din't read fast but I read slow... I think you wrote 'me' instead of 'he' once, but thats all... Loved it!
1TheBewingedWolfLoved it all! When i thourgh if couldn't get better, if got even better! XD I hold my breath for avile.. 3 And I laught a lot! XD I din't read fast but I read slow... I think you wrote 'me' instead of 'he' once, but thats all... Loved it!
7/29/2009 c1 33Daaro Moltor
Oh, yes you ARE perverted! XD And it is hilarious! ;)
"Maybe... maybe I wouldn't mind having a squeel to this storry..." XD
33Daaro MoltorOh, yes you ARE perverted! XD And it is hilarious! ;)
"Maybe... maybe I wouldn't mind having a squeel to this storry..." XD
7/25/2009 c1 Zailana
OMG! So funny! XD
Great story, really! Unfortunately it's only rated T... dammit. ^^
OMG! So funny! XD
Great story, really! Unfortunately it's only rated T... dammit. ^^
7/23/2009 c1 4unwanted- angel
this was cute! the whole lemon thing made me think there was going to be, well, lemon. but it's rated t, so i was like, ok no sex, so why is it called lemon? anyway, i liked this. make another.
4unwanted- angelthis was cute! the whole lemon thing made me think there was going to be, well, lemon. but it's rated t, so i was like, ok no sex, so why is it called lemon? anyway, i liked this. make another.