for Of Fangs and Wands9/23/2020 c2 IsabelLilyAthenaPotterMalfoy
Buffy was born 19th January 1981 she was 19 at the beginning of season 5 and she found out she was a vampire slayer 1996 age 15 not 1995.
Buffy was born 19th January 1981 she was 19 at the beginning of season 5 and she found out she was a vampire slayer 1996 age 15 not 1995.
12/29/2012 c2 Draco mudiliar
voldemort died too soon and that leaves me wondering what is to come next...
voldemort died too soon and that leaves me wondering what is to come next...
12/7/2012 c1 Peta
Yeah, I already read this (}:. I would just like to point out that your profile is really excessively long. Shorten the damn thing!
Yeah, I already read this (}:. I would just like to point out that your profile is really excessively long. Shorten the damn thing!
12/28/2011 c1 critic
good story but for fcks sake can u please UPDATE you started in 09 you updated in 2010 its now nearly 2012 DO SUMMAT
good story but for fcks sake can u please UPDATE you started in 09 you updated in 2010 its now nearly 2012 DO SUMMAT
10/17/2011 c2 
7Draeconin
The chapter was very rushed, as was chapter one. Anxious to get to a certain part of the story, were you? Still, it's best to give all chapters the same consideration, for quality's sake. On the other hand, if the following chapters are as badly rushed as these first two were...
7DraeconinThe chapter was very rushed, as was chapter one. Anxious to get to a certain part of the story, were you? Still, it's best to give all chapters the same consideration, for quality's sake. On the other hand, if the following chapters are as badly rushed as these first two were...
3/13/2011 c5 26Sarcasm Dragon
The American Teenager theme was the best part of the story. Other than that, it didn't have much going for it.
Neither Harry nor Hermione acted in-character. Most tellingly, they lacked any horror at becoming vampires. Their nonchalance at what happened to them was jarring, not cool.
The scene with Buffy and her gang appearing was disappointing. The only person with any real lines was "Raven", everyone else was basically only included to make your main character seem cool.
The bits where Ron is paid to be Harry's friend and Dumbledore is evil and manipulative were simply copies of what other fan fic writers have done. There was nothing creative in what happened there.
You did have the Buffy attitude, but you need to bring something more than combining two stories with sarcasm if you want it to be good writing. At least there were few grammar or usage errors, so I will say you do have promise. Hope your next effort looks at the character motivations more and describes how they change better than this one.
26Sarcasm DragonThe American Teenager theme was the best part of the story. Other than that, it didn't have much going for it.
Neither Harry nor Hermione acted in-character. Most tellingly, they lacked any horror at becoming vampires. Their nonchalance at what happened to them was jarring, not cool.
The scene with Buffy and her gang appearing was disappointing. The only person with any real lines was "Raven", everyone else was basically only included to make your main character seem cool.
The bits where Ron is paid to be Harry's friend and Dumbledore is evil and manipulative were simply copies of what other fan fic writers have done. There was nothing creative in what happened there.
You did have the Buffy attitude, but you need to bring something more than combining two stories with sarcasm if you want it to be good writing. At least there were few grammar or usage errors, so I will say you do have promise. Hope your next effort looks at the character motivations more and describes how they change better than this one.
8/7/2010 c3 2BadReader
'All spells used in this chapter, minus the ward, are real.'
Really? Magic is real? :D
2BadReader'All spells used in this chapter, minus the ward, are real.'
Really? Magic is real? :D
12/5/2009 c4 cagna
i really like this story and hope you update soon. smartass harry is really funny to read.
i really like this story and hope you update soon. smartass harry is really funny to read.