for Of Fangs and Wands10/16/2009 c4 
4verynearlysouffled
This is great with few errors. I can't think of what else I wanted to say now other than post soon and great work and nice plot idea.
4verynearlysouffledThis is great with few errors. I can't think of what else I wanted to say now other than post soon and great work and nice plot idea.
9/28/2009 c4 8Sabaku no Sable
one vamp that buffy cant defeat: harry potter a.k.a Raven bad ass psycho vamp.
8Sabaku no Sableone vamp that buffy cant defeat: harry potter a.k.a Raven bad ass psycho vamp.
9/25/2009 c2 ROBERT-19588
The fallowing ideas and questions I have, are not ment to tell anyone how to write their stories. I like characters that think, thats why I have the ideas that fallow:
I hope Dobby and Winky will help Harry.I hope Dobby and Winky will help Harry.
Harry should still be Lord Black & Potter.
Harry should also be Lord Slytherin by conquest, as Harry defeated Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort", by destoring Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle's, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort's" physical being as a child and again his (First, Second) year(s) at Hogwarts. Harry needs to cast "Thomas Marvolo Riddle, Jr." out of the Slytherin family foever.
Harry should by Lord Griffindor, as Harry pulled Lord Godric Griffindor's sword from the Sorting Hat.
Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a skills and heritage test run on him, as well check for any magical Blocks and tracking devices on him or his thangs.
- Harry needs to see what skills he has that he does not know about.
- Harry needs to see what other families he is relatd to, IE:
Arthur Pendragon, Godric Griffindor, Merlin, Etc.
- Harry needs to see what blocks (on his magic or himself, any tracking
devices or spells on him.)
- If Harry finds out he only related to the Potters, at least he checked.
Same goes for the Blocks and spells, if he finds none, at least he checked.
Having Harry check at Gringotts would be normal for anyone
Harry needs a list of all the business (both Magical and Non-Magical), properties, money, stocks, bonds, jewels, he owns.
While at Gringotts Harry needs a way to spend his oney with out going to Gringotts all the time.
The fallowing ideas and questions I have, are not ment to tell anyone how to write their stories. I like characters that think, thats why I have the ideas that fallow:
I hope Dobby and Winky will help Harry.I hope Dobby and Winky will help Harry.
Harry should still be Lord Black & Potter.
Harry should also be Lord Slytherin by conquest, as Harry defeated Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort", by destoring Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle's, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort's" physical being as a child and again his (First, Second) year(s) at Hogwarts. Harry needs to cast "Thomas Marvolo Riddle, Jr." out of the Slytherin family foever.
Harry should by Lord Griffindor, as Harry pulled Lord Godric Griffindor's sword from the Sorting Hat.
Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a skills and heritage test run on him, as well check for any magical Blocks and tracking devices on him or his thangs.
- Harry needs to see what skills he has that he does not know about.
- Harry needs to see what other families he is relatd to, IE:
Arthur Pendragon, Godric Griffindor, Merlin, Etc.
- Harry needs to see what blocks (on his magic or himself, any tracking
devices or spells on him.)
- If Harry finds out he only related to the Potters, at least he checked.
Same goes for the Blocks and spells, if he finds none, at least he checked.
Having Harry check at Gringotts would be normal for anyone
Harry needs a list of all the business (both Magical and Non-Magical), properties, money, stocks, bonds, jewels, he owns.
While at Gringotts Harry needs a way to spend his oney with out going to Gringotts all the time.
9/24/2009 c4 31ArrancarMaiden
:D Great job. I really enjoy reading this story, and have been waiting eagerly for it. I like this chapter (go Raven!). I know how it is to have way too many ideas and so short time. Happens to me too, I start another story when I should be updating my other ones (what can I say, the ideas are just screaming to get out of my head and onto the net :D).
I will be waiting patiently for the next update, but no pressure. You write and post it when you can. :D
PS Kool that you just started college. Me too. Good for you for actually going to college, instead of being lazy like some people I know.
31ArrancarMaiden:D Great job. I really enjoy reading this story, and have been waiting eagerly for it. I like this chapter (go Raven!). I know how it is to have way too many ideas and so short time. Happens to me too, I start another story when I should be updating my other ones (what can I say, the ideas are just screaming to get out of my head and onto the net :D).
I will be waiting patiently for the next update, but no pressure. You write and post it when you can. :D
PS Kool that you just started college. Me too. Good for you for actually going to college, instead of being lazy like some people I know.
9/1/2009 c3 1ShenobiKageKitsune
Humm at the end of Harry's probably very long life he will probably have to name a magical heir or the Potter and black line will end up going to an off shoot third cousin from Alabama lol
1ShenobiKageKitsuneHumm at the end of Harry's probably very long life he will probably have to name a magical heir or the Potter and black line will end up going to an off shoot third cousin from Alabama lol
8/23/2009 c3 foxykitsuneyouko
awesome story please update soon. this story seems like its going to be very good
awesome story please update soon. this story seems like its going to be very good
8/3/2009 c2 7jabarber69
Hey you do realize that effectively the Potter and Black line has ended, since vamps cant impregnant or give birth! so he just jumped from the frying pan into the freaking fire!
7jabarber69Hey you do realize that effectively the Potter and Black line has ended, since vamps cant impregnant or give birth! so he just jumped from the frying pan into the freaking fire!
8/3/2009 c1 jabarber69
nice story and good ideal, but one hermione mention vampire attacks are up and she sent him a silver cross, like that was going to do anything, and then she said meet me in the dark descrete alley next to gringotts when your done, then he enters said alley seeing a broken wand his instincts are screaming DANGER! and what does he do, the usual he ignores them and goes on ahead, then seeing hermioine laying in a pool of blood the first thing that pops into his head, forget everything you have ever learned and DIE! and then he lets his guard down BIG TIME and gets bit by a vampire, duh, how stupid can he be! guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out if they are both full vamps or did something else happen and they are now only half vamps, also can they still go into the sun?
nice story and good ideal, but one hermione mention vampire attacks are up and she sent him a silver cross, like that was going to do anything, and then she said meet me in the dark descrete alley next to gringotts when your done, then he enters said alley seeing a broken wand his instincts are screaming DANGER! and what does he do, the usual he ignores them and goes on ahead, then seeing hermioine laying in a pool of blood the first thing that pops into his head, forget everything you have ever learned and DIE! and then he lets his guard down BIG TIME and gets bit by a vampire, duh, how stupid can he be! guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out if they are both full vamps or did something else happen and they are now only half vamps, also can they still go into the sun?
8/3/2009 c2 31Sakura Lisel
I like it so far, but now I'm confused. After they were turned, did Harry and Hermoine just drop out of sight from the Magical world? Nobody bothered looking for the new Lord of the Black house, or did Harry's 'death' magically get registered when he got turned? *lol*
31Sakura LiselI like it so far, but now I'm confused. After they were turned, did Harry and Hermoine just drop out of sight from the Magical world? Nobody bothered looking for the new Lord of the Black house, or did Harry's 'death' magically get registered when he got turned? *lol*