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2/3/2011 c1 12birthofthecool
I love Ellis Thunderbolts, but I was also pretty pissed at how totally Karla turned to the darj side again.

And I miss Jolt as well, she probably is my favorite Thunderbolt beside Songbird.

Your story is quite good, but you should check for grammar and you often use he instead of she.

Plus there are many cases were you just used a totally wrong word.

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