for Pain on Pain9/8/2024 c7 EndlessGloaming
This is much more the sort of resolution and emotional hashing out I wanted at their reunion. Lots of good tension.
This is much more the sort of resolution and emotional hashing out I wanted at their reunion. Lots of good tension.
9/2/2021 c7 Jade
Wow! Thank you. This is what I wished I read in New Moon. You are an incredible writer. I was often frustrated reading New Moon because of the way things panned out in regards to Bella's suffering, or even how Bella and Edward communicated/acted upon Edward's return, which seemed to almost dismiss the distressing act of Edward leaving and belittle Bella's pain. I loved the way Bella stood up for her self and communicated her pain and anger in your story. Edward's response and justification was just as satisfying. I really hope you continue your writing. I would love to continue to read your version of the Twilight series.
Wow! Thank you. This is what I wished I read in New Moon. You are an incredible writer. I was often frustrated reading New Moon because of the way things panned out in regards to Bella's suffering, or even how Bella and Edward communicated/acted upon Edward's return, which seemed to almost dismiss the distressing act of Edward leaving and belittle Bella's pain. I loved the way Bella stood up for her self and communicated her pain and anger in your story. Edward's response and justification was just as satisfying. I really hope you continue your writing. I would love to continue to read your version of the Twilight series.
8/31/2021 c3 mdss13
Thank you for this, the words flow so right and you can really see Bella the way she is. And it's true, in the canon they just together so effortlessly, there's only that part of Bella not sleeping in the plane in case it was a dream, that definitely didn't feel right.
Thank you for this, the words flow so right and you can really see Bella the way she is. And it's true, in the canon they just together so effortlessly, there's only that part of Bella not sleeping in the plane in case it was a dream, that definitely didn't feel right.
2/10/2020 c7 BurtonM1927
Finally, a writer brings out Bella's strength and self respect. Love the story.
Finally, a writer brings out Bella's strength and self respect. Love the story.
11/7/2019 c7 
4that's just morbid
Damn it! I want slow gentle hot sex! This story is amazing. Perfectly covers all of the makeup stuff that the original story for some reason didn't. Love it!
4that's just morbidDamn it! I want slow gentle hot sex! This story is amazing. Perfectly covers all of the makeup stuff that the original story for some reason didn't. Love it!
11/1/2018 c7 33trulisthetic
I just read this start to finish... and I have no idea if you will ever see this or if you're still around but I need you to know, this was my favorite fanfic of all times. I am in awe right now, I can't even think around the fact that this story as it is, was enough to justify all these years I've been in the world of fanfics. Seriously, I can't thank you enough. I can't believe how brilliant you are. The story was perfect, the emotions portrayed flawlessly with such realism GOODNESS I CANT BREATHE, the angst was so painful but not too much, and the comforting the end brought was worth a million heartaches. I was squealing the entire way through, my face is crimson red as I'm writing this, I legitimately cried, and there were about a dozen points when I just had to put the freaking phone down and scream in a pillow to release all the things you made me feel because honestly, this was SUCH A HIGH. I don't even know why people do drugs. I would have stopped to review at the end of every chapter because God knows you deserve it, you deserve the world for thisbut I freaking couldn't. if I waited a moment longer to click the button to the next chapter I would have literally combusted.
Seriously, this was just incredible. Perfection with every literal meaning of the word. I will never be able to show you how truly grateful I am to you for this gem. Best story I've ever read, kudos to you... THANK YOU. And I am in love with your brain.
33trulistheticI just read this start to finish... and I have no idea if you will ever see this or if you're still around but I need you to know, this was my favorite fanfic of all times. I am in awe right now, I can't even think around the fact that this story as it is, was enough to justify all these years I've been in the world of fanfics. Seriously, I can't thank you enough. I can't believe how brilliant you are. The story was perfect, the emotions portrayed flawlessly with such realism GOODNESS I CANT BREATHE, the angst was so painful but not too much, and the comforting the end brought was worth a million heartaches. I was squealing the entire way through, my face is crimson red as I'm writing this, I legitimately cried, and there were about a dozen points when I just had to put the freaking phone down and scream in a pillow to release all the things you made me feel because honestly, this was SUCH A HIGH. I don't even know why people do drugs. I would have stopped to review at the end of every chapter because God knows you deserve it, you deserve the world for thisbut I freaking couldn't. if I waited a moment longer to click the button to the next chapter I would have literally combusted.
Seriously, this was just incredible. Perfection with every literal meaning of the word. I will never be able to show you how truly grateful I am to you for this gem. Best story I've ever read, kudos to you... THANK YOU. And I am in love with your brain.
9/3/2018 c5 Elvire23
I think your going to easy on him. I want Bella to scream and shout and punish him for his idiocy.
I think your going to easy on him. I want Bella to scream and shout and punish him for his idiocy.