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10/11/2018 c2 25NancyDrew123
Wow, I think I notice Zenigata acting like a caring father to Lupin. Can you please tell me if the inspector got the thief to the hospital? If he did, it would make sense to know how Lupin got there when he wakes up and why Jigen and Goemon are behind bars.
10/11/2018 c1 NancyDrew123
That was a good start to this story.
4/21/2014 c1 Guest
Lupin from Harry Potter series?
5/29/2011 c4 3SmileyLOLz
Not bad.

Great description of Ness there

Hope u update soon!I'm really getting into this now ^.^
5/21/2011 c1 2Negai Liu
Hello. I was reading the past Earthbound crossover Fanfics and I came across yours.

Even though it's been roughly two years, please allow me to review your story.

Great use of description and detail; it really adds suspense!

You've skillfully incooperated Giygas and Ness into the situations and future.

There are some slight grammar mistakes in your Fanfic I've noticed but they're only minor.

Overall, great story and, although you may refuse, I plead you to continue the Fanfic. It may have been dead for months and you may have said you've completed it, but it doesn't mean it cannot be revived.
9/2/2009 c2 Burps McGee
Wow, this fanfic is swell. Me likey! Keep up the good work! :D

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