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2/14/2015 c1 11SupernaturalHearts
I hope you continue this. I would love to see the next chapter.
3/13/2014 c7 Guest
Holding back on chapters because of lack of reviews makes you seem needy for attention. You don't want people to feel obligated to reviewing, because then you get reviews like "good" or "can't wait for the next chapter" you want them to be reviews that help to make you better. That being said, I think you are rushing through this to get to the climax
2/25/2014 c3 Guest
can you make one where naruto is the seme/pitcher to ita and sasu?
2/25/2014 c7 4Rosebunse
Hm, well, it looks fun.
9/3/2013 c5 77mysticaldragon11
yes, yes, yes, please continue. I would love to see more of this story!
12/25/2011 c2 Deidara Luv3r
Aww
12/25/2011 c2 Deidara Luv3r
Aww
12/25/2011 c1 Deidara Luv3r
Awww so kyuute
1/5/2011 c5 Artistic Spectrum
Pretty good but could they please be longer? Write more!
1/5/2011 c4 Artistic Spectrum
You don't put many periods and some grammer errors...But who cares about the periods,it was an OK chapter.
1/5/2011 c3 Artistic Spectrum
Heh.Pretty good lemon,nice chapter overall.
1/5/2011 c2 Artistic Spectrum
This is a good chapter too!
1/5/2011 c1 Artistic Spectrum
This was really nice.Short,but nice.I like Itachi nice to Sasuke better than mean cause when he would poke him on the forehead in flashbacks and stuff in the anime,it would be so cute and I really like this.
12/29/2009 c3 damselwish
cant wait for u to update

the story pace is well done and so is the writing XD

its very cute in chapter 1 especially xD
12/29/2009 c4 4Dominican Kitsune
Aw! This chapter was soo cute! I'm gonna have to reread it because I have no idea whatsoever what this is about... aw...
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