for Life Can be Complicated2/24/2014 c7 Guest
The hell! When the climax in the story is there... The next chapter isn't! Please continue! I really(10milliontimes) wanna read about Kaien and Ichigo's rivalry! May the best man win! Grrrrr! Come on! Please! Update soon! Even though I know who will win, I still wanna read how? Pls...! Update and Continue this AWESOME and COOL story!
The hell! When the climax in the story is there... The next chapter isn't! Please continue! I really(10milliontimes) wanna read about Kaien and Ichigo's rivalry! May the best man win! Grrrrr! Come on! Please! Update soon! Even though I know who will win, I still wanna read how? Pls...! Update and Continue this AWESOME and COOL story!
6/21/2010 c7 
5Rukes
I like this story please update. Oh and so far this story is romance/drama. Please update ASAP.
5RukesI like this story please update. Oh and so far this story is romance/drama. Please update ASAP.
6/21/2010 c7 1Meru-Panda
Thankz for ur update..
I ♥ ur fic..
Omg.. Kaien appeared?
He.. Really resembles Ichigo.. Except hair,eyes,and age.. New rival.. Rukia! U belong to Ichi.. And Ichi ! U belong to Rukia.. U're belong to each other~
*in la la land*
Update~
1Meru-PandaThankz for ur update..
I ♥ ur fic..
Omg.. Kaien appeared?
He.. Really resembles Ichigo.. Except hair,eyes,and age.. New rival.. Rukia! U belong to Ichi.. And Ichi ! U belong to Rukia.. U're belong to each other~
*in la la land*
Update~
5/28/2010 c7 2newogre
it is a good storyline but i do have some minor suggestions. first the way you do your dialog. it makes it hard to establish who is talking, try putting something after or before telling who the person speaking was and the tone of what they said, exclamation points don't do much since they are over used and suggest that the words are stressed, but not how. also your story seems to be rushed, take your time with it and don't worry about updating once or week or whatever, do it when you are satified with your writing. and finally the characters. try to develop them a little better. remember this is your story so they don't have to be based directly on the series and just because you change a part of their personality doesn't mean that it is ooc, the characters are your own and in the series it doesn't display all the emotions of every character. you jump from character to character quickly along with scenes. quick changes are fine but you write maybe two sentences about them before moving on to another. the confession scene with Toshiro, where did he go? why didn't he get involved? more detail on actions and emotions and more of an explanation of these pasts you bring up.
again these are only suggestions and i like your story but the way you write makes it difficult to follow. don't take this as a reason to quit, keep it up
2newogreit is a good storyline but i do have some minor suggestions. first the way you do your dialog. it makes it hard to establish who is talking, try putting something after or before telling who the person speaking was and the tone of what they said, exclamation points don't do much since they are over used and suggest that the words are stressed, but not how. also your story seems to be rushed, take your time with it and don't worry about updating once or week or whatever, do it when you are satified with your writing. and finally the characters. try to develop them a little better. remember this is your story so they don't have to be based directly on the series and just because you change a part of their personality doesn't mean that it is ooc, the characters are your own and in the series it doesn't display all the emotions of every character. you jump from character to character quickly along with scenes. quick changes are fine but you write maybe two sentences about them before moving on to another. the confession scene with Toshiro, where did he go? why didn't he get involved? more detail on actions and emotions and more of an explanation of these pasts you bring up.
again these are only suggestions and i like your story but the way you write makes it difficult to follow. don't take this as a reason to quit, keep it up
4/26/2010 c6 26SparklyColours
KAIEN! YAY! as you can see I love Kaien! please dont make him get heartbroken! anyways good, update soon please!
26SparklyColoursKAIEN! YAY! as you can see I love Kaien! please dont make him get heartbroken! anyways good, update soon please!
4/26/2010 c6 20Spiceandsugar10
You finally updated! XD I'm happy! But this story's so sad, still... I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL PEOPLE FIND OUT RUKIA HAS CANCER! XD XD XD
I think Rukia's case is the worse of them all, she can actually DIE from it.
UPDATED SOON!
20Spiceandsugar10You finally updated! XD I'm happy! But this story's so sad, still... I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL PEOPLE FIND OUT RUKIA HAS CANCER! XD XD XD
I think Rukia's case is the worse of them all, she can actually DIE from it.
UPDATED SOON!
4/23/2010 c5 26SparklyColours
good. i want to know what happens to Rukia with the cancer stuff, and whats Rangiku's past. please update soon!
26SparklyColoursgood. i want to know what happens to Rukia with the cancer stuff, and whats Rangiku's past. please update soon!
4/18/2010 c5 3ExemplaryRadiation
i started crying during this chapter! i liked it so much! update soon!
3ExemplaryRadiationi started crying during this chapter! i liked it so much! update soon!