8/29/2009 c2 Memory from a dream
nice very nice. I like to see how Edward felt all of this time and this shows it well:) I can't wait for u to update soon!
Memsy
nice very nice. I like to see how Edward felt all of this time and this shows it well:) I can't wait for u to update soon!
Memsy
8/28/2009 c2 10xMrs.Gregory.Housex
Gah! Yet another distraction from finishing my English assignment. I already seem my professor and I having problems due to my lack of concentration. Lol. Though, I thank you for your help in the process of my procrastination. Yet another great story and you better damn well believe I'll be waiting for an update for both of your stories. I do believe I have you to thank for getting me back into the grove with Twilight fictions. =] Take care and happy writing ( notice the long pointless rambling? More procrastination. Go me!)
-Anna
Gah! Yet another distraction from finishing my English assignment. I already seem my professor and I having problems due to my lack of concentration. Lol. Though, I thank you for your help in the process of my procrastination. Yet another great story and you better damn well believe I'll be waiting for an update for both of your stories. I do believe I have you to thank for getting me back into the grove with Twilight fictions. =] Take care and happy writing ( notice the long pointless rambling? More procrastination. Go me!)
-Anna
8/28/2009 c2 Sdjk
Communication and misunderstandings can really impact our choices and direction. Poor Bella walking in on that on their Grad night. Love EPOV.
Communication and misunderstandings can really impact our choices and direction. Poor Bella walking in on that on their Grad night. Love EPOV.
8/28/2009 c1 Los Grotos
*gasps!* I was right, he was in love with her!
lolz, thank you for creating this!
*gasps!* I was right, he was in love with her!
lolz, thank you for creating this!
8/28/2009 c2 4DawnOfNight55
I really like edwards pov
it gives you a whole more insight
of whats going on in his head.
i knew he liked bella =)
& im glad emmetts in the story.
I really like edwards pov
it gives you a whole more insight
of whats going on in his head.
i knew he liked bella =)
& im glad emmetts in the story.
8/28/2009 c2 mveroherr
I love E's pov. I understand now why Bella felt the need to move on to someone else. E could not keep in his pants even though he loved B, that is very messed up
I love E's pov. I understand now why Bella felt the need to move on to someone else. E could not keep in his pants even though he loved B, that is very messed up
8/26/2009 c2 MasenCullen
Boy oh boy oh boy did Edward fuck up in that flashback. Fucking Angela was his first mistake and not locking the goddamn door was the second... need I go on? ::shakes head:: I loved Emmett and Edward shootin the shit at the dive bar. I can just picture Emmett's eyes buggin' out of his head when Edward told him that Bella and Alice want him to be their sperm donor. But the icing on the cake was when he told Emmett what he said to Bella in response. Holy. Shit. ::mouth agape::- Yeah... that is Emmett's reaction.
I'm very excited to hear EPOV on their first time together. I think it's going to be a pivotal part in whether they are more than just friends. To me... it's pretty obvious by their body language they are more than just friends... Bella just needs to do some soul searching.
Boy oh boy oh boy did Edward fuck up in that flashback. Fucking Angela was his first mistake and not locking the goddamn door was the second... need I go on? ::shakes head:: I loved Emmett and Edward shootin the shit at the dive bar. I can just picture Emmett's eyes buggin' out of his head when Edward told him that Bella and Alice want him to be their sperm donor. But the icing on the cake was when he told Emmett what he said to Bella in response. Holy. Shit. ::mouth agape::- Yeah... that is Emmett's reaction.
I'm very excited to hear EPOV on their first time together. I think it's going to be a pivotal part in whether they are more than just friends. To me... it's pretty obvious by their body language they are more than just friends... Bella just needs to do some soul searching.
8/26/2009 c2 5tinkermegan68
okay so yeah I have a love/hate relationship with edward haha
like, I feel bad for him because of him always having such strong feelings for Bella but never being able to do anything about it...then I hate him for sticking his dick into anything and everything hahaha
atleast with E POV you get to see that no one is as innocent as they seem...love this story 3
okay so yeah I have a love/hate relationship with edward haha
like, I feel bad for him because of him always having such strong feelings for Bella but never being able to do anything about it...then I hate him for sticking his dick into anything and everything hahaha
atleast with E POV you get to see that no one is as innocent as they seem...love this story 3
8/26/2009 c1 tinkermegan68
So yeah, Im fail and just now started reading AIN..please don't hurt me :( k? haha
well, I was going to wait to start it once there were a few more chaps, but I caved...and can I just say...
LOVE IT! The E POV is so insightful and helps complete the picture :)
So yeah, Im fail and just now started reading AIN..please don't hurt me :( k? haha
well, I was going to wait to start it once there were a few more chaps, but I caved...and can I just say...
LOVE IT! The E POV is so insightful and helps complete the picture :)
8/25/2009 c2 Rgwmnks
I am enjoying both POV's of this story. I didn't even know about this one until I went to the Forum on Twilighted. I really hope that you continue with BOTH stories as they are both FANTASTIC.
I am enjoying both POV's of this story. I didn't even know about this one until I went to the Forum on Twilighted. I really hope that you continue with BOTH stories as they are both FANTASTIC.
8/25/2009 c2 mooch11
I love seeing Edward's POV because it's OOC but more realistic, kinda feel sorry for him seeing as he's liked Bella for so long. Nice flashback btw, loved that :)
Looking forward to more, can't wait! xx
I love seeing Edward's POV because it's OOC but more realistic, kinda feel sorry for him seeing as he's liked Bella for so long. Nice flashback btw, loved that :)
Looking forward to more, can't wait! xx
8/24/2009 c2 TwilightFan104
I see no reason to be mad at you. This was a great insight into E&B's past. Tennage clueless jerk Edward broke her heart. That explains a lot. And I love Emmett here. (actually I alwaus love him. LOL) At least he was willing to tell Edward the truth about what he sees and how bad the outcome could be. Can't wait to read more.
I see no reason to be mad at you. This was a great insight into E&B's past. Tennage clueless jerk Edward broke her heart. That explains a lot. And I love Emmett here. (actually I alwaus love him. LOL) At least he was willing to tell Edward the truth about what he sees and how bad the outcome could be. Can't wait to read more.