for All I Need9/17/2009 c2 
8babylopez2008
so that's what happened, basically Bella caught the wrong actions and such causing Bella to back peddle away from Edward.
omg you made Angela dirty... lol ugh can Tanya be anymore bitter?
8babylopez2008so that's what happened, basically Bella caught the wrong actions and such causing Bella to back peddle away from Edward.
omg you made Angela dirty... lol ugh can Tanya be anymore bitter?
9/17/2009 c1 babylopez2008
Eww Edward, Tanya really? OMG that was hilarious that he had to fake it. And she couldn't even tell... lol So I guess that means that she has been around the block, that's what people say right?
Eww Edward, Tanya really? OMG that was hilarious that he had to fake it. And she couldn't even tell... lol So I guess that means that she has been around the block, that's what people say right?
9/16/2009 c1 cod46
I love how Edward doesn´t try to make excuses about his behaviour. After all he is single. The whole Tanya/sex was not as awful as I would have thought, because you added the funny thoughts he had about her and what he was doing.
His inner dialogue is hilarious. I am reading the "original" of this story, from BPOV, and I was wondering if he had always been in love with her. Well, it´s good to have a glimpse at whatever is inside his brain and soul.
If I am not fan of girl/girl fics this is quite different and I like it very much so far. Thank you for taking your own time to write and even more for sharing it with us.
I love how Edward doesn´t try to make excuses about his behaviour. After all he is single. The whole Tanya/sex was not as awful as I would have thought, because you added the funny thoughts he had about her and what he was doing.
His inner dialogue is hilarious. I am reading the "original" of this story, from BPOV, and I was wondering if he had always been in love with her. Well, it´s good to have a glimpse at whatever is inside his brain and soul.
If I am not fan of girl/girl fics this is quite different and I like it very much so far. Thank you for taking your own time to write and even more for sharing it with us.
9/16/2009 c1 edwardandbellabelong2gether
I could never be mad at Edward...okay maybe a little! Love it!
I could never be mad at Edward...okay maybe a little! Love it!
9/15/2009 c4 spellboundagain
*sigh*
So much wasted time for these two.
Oh well - there is no better time than the present...
*sigh*
So much wasted time for these two.
Oh well - there is no better time than the present...
9/15/2009 c2 spellboundagain
I love the background info. It makes everything kind of fall into place.
It is funny to see how they were each thinking different, yet similar things...
I love the background info. It makes everything kind of fall into place.
It is funny to see how they were each thinking different, yet similar things...
9/15/2009 c1 spellboundagain
Tanya - Yuck, I need brain bleach to get that image out of my head...yuck!
Tanya - Yuck, I need brain bleach to get that image out of my head...yuck!
9/13/2009 c4 2LikeToRead22
Yes, Edward's got it bad. But...apparently Bella does too. :-) Great chapter!
2LikeToRead22Yes, Edward's got it bad. But...apparently Bella does too. :-) Great chapter!
9/12/2009 c4 7Mcc101180
His feelings really do run deep, don't they? Loved the flashback and the almost kiss. What is his mom playing at getting out the old pictures? I bet she has always known that he wanted to be more than just friends with her.
Em's cryptic email was very interesting.
This part intrigued me: "What kind of fool was I to think I could turn her straight and make her love me?" All the timen Edward was vehemently denying that he was trying to turn her straight, yet this thought is the one that pops into his head. Just goes to show you, just because you say it doesn't make it true.
Yay for the camping trip coming up.
7Mcc101180His feelings really do run deep, don't they? Loved the flashback and the almost kiss. What is his mom playing at getting out the old pictures? I bet she has always known that he wanted to be more than just friends with her.
Em's cryptic email was very interesting.
This part intrigued me: "What kind of fool was I to think I could turn her straight and make her love me?" All the timen Edward was vehemently denying that he was trying to turn her straight, yet this thought is the one that pops into his head. Just goes to show you, just because you say it doesn't make it true.
Yay for the camping trip coming up.
9/12/2009 c3 Mcc101180
Very interesting to see from Edward's side. The whispered words that we weren't privy to from Bella's POV; the emotions he's had bottled up.
Rose is awesome, her attitude and fierceness are total WIN.
Glad to see that Edward recognized how much the situation was affecting Bella regardless of how much she seemed to be enjoying it, and he wanted to do whatever he could to salvage his friendship with her.
Tanya and her threats of sexual harrassment suits, bo for her. She needs to get over herself and resign herself to the fact that she won't be getting anymore of Edward's "big dick".
I'm confused about one thing though. In BPOV for this chap, when they get up to the bedroom they start kissing and then Bella cuts it off saying they shouldn't kiss, while here she says it before they start kissing.
Very interesting to see from Edward's side. The whispered words that we weren't privy to from Bella's POV; the emotions he's had bottled up.
Rose is awesome, her attitude and fierceness are total WIN.
Glad to see that Edward recognized how much the situation was affecting Bella regardless of how much she seemed to be enjoying it, and he wanted to do whatever he could to salvage his friendship with her.
Tanya and her threats of sexual harrassment suits, bo for her. She needs to get over herself and resign herself to the fact that she won't be getting anymore of Edward's "big dick".
I'm confused about one thing though. In BPOV for this chap, when they get up to the bedroom they start kissing and then Bella cuts it off saying they shouldn't kiss, while here she says it before they start kissing.
9/12/2009 c2 Mcc101180
Fantastic.
I always wondered whether Emmett and Rosalie would show up. I love me some Emmett and yours did not disappoint. His straight-shooting is a warm welcome in comparision to all the dancing that the other characters often do. Love the reasoning behind the lack of face-time around Bella and Alice. Can't blame Rose for being peeved by his blatant ogling of the girl on girl action.
The flashbacks give a great insight into Edward's feelings for Bella as well as the implication of hers towards him. I think you've woven them into the plot beautifully.
Fantastic.
I always wondered whether Emmett and Rosalie would show up. I love me some Emmett and yours did not disappoint. His straight-shooting is a warm welcome in comparision to all the dancing that the other characters often do. Love the reasoning behind the lack of face-time around Bella and Alice. Can't blame Rose for being peeved by his blatant ogling of the girl on girl action.
The flashbacks give a great insight into Edward's feelings for Bella as well as the implication of hers towards him. I think you've woven them into the plot beautifully.
9/12/2009 c1 Mcc101180
Really enjoyed seeing into Edward's head.
The Tanya thing was so funny, yet so sad. Though it is kinda ironic that he was commenting on Bella's inability to handle alcohol, and a few beers was all it took to end up with "too loose Tanya".
His thought process when he came up with the plan was very intriguing.
I have thoughts of Edward taming the beast stuck in my head, as well as Jessica and oranges and onions on her breath.
Really enjoyed seeing into Edward's head.
The Tanya thing was so funny, yet so sad. Though it is kinda ironic that he was commenting on Bella's inability to handle alcohol, and a few beers was all it took to end up with "too loose Tanya".
His thought process when he came up with the plan was very intriguing.
I have thoughts of Edward taming the beast stuck in my head, as well as Jessica and oranges and onions on her breath.