for Broken Strings9/20/2010 c1 diehardtwilightfan23
Haha yet another round... Ha Id love to see it continued because I loved the story
Haha yet another round... Ha Id love to see it continued because I loved the story
4/30/2010 c1 
7TwiSagaLover
i loved it! and want you to add more to it! its too good to be a one shot!
7TwiSagaLoveri loved it! and want you to add more to it! its too good to be a one shot!
8/23/2009 c1 trimee
WOW ! I HOPE YOU WON! THAT WAS AMAZING!
I WILL READ EVERY THING YOU WRITE YOU ROCK!
WOW ! I HOPE YOU WON! THAT WAS AMAZING!
I WILL READ EVERY THING YOU WRITE YOU ROCK!
8/13/2009 c1 coxie
I loved the song you used.
Ick, that's a shitty way to break up with someone, but honestly, if she couldn't find any other way to do it, or to make him understand, then it had to be done that way. I like how Edward and Bella realized that they had seen each other before.
The sexing was HOT!, but just wondering: were they nude in the middle of the shop? aren't there windows? Are they ion a private room? When did they end up on a bed?
I really did enjoy this, but this definitely needs to be checked for errors.
I loved the song you used.
Ick, that's a shitty way to break up with someone, but honestly, if she couldn't find any other way to do it, or to make him understand, then it had to be done that way. I like how Edward and Bella realized that they had seen each other before.
The sexing was HOT!, but just wondering: were they nude in the middle of the shop? aren't there windows? Are they ion a private room? When did they end up on a bed?
I really did enjoy this, but this definitely needs to be checked for errors.
8/1/2009 c1 2revrag
Whoa. Brave, brave Bella to get up and sing - all the while dumping a boy. Holy shit! I can hardly believe that!
Then, to see what you've the love you've longed to see in green eyes? Oh dear goodness.
I loved it. The sex was great, too. I absolutely love it when people share tastes.
And yes, I'm a fucking pervert.
LOL
Anyway, nice work.
2revragWhoa. Brave, brave Bella to get up and sing - all the while dumping a boy. Holy shit! I can hardly believe that!
Then, to see what you've the love you've longed to see in green eyes? Oh dear goodness.
I loved it. The sex was great, too. I absolutely love it when people share tastes.
And yes, I'm a fucking pervert.
LOL
Anyway, nice work.
7/29/2009 c1 babyot
This story has the best break up scene EVER with the karaoke and that song, specifically! Perfect set-up that Edward is in the crowd and quite serendipitous that she chooses his work in the tat shop. Who doesn't want some hot sexin after getting inked - I know I did! Hot lemon, too, so thanks!
This story has the best break up scene EVER with the karaoke and that song, specifically! Perfect set-up that Edward is in the crowd and quite serendipitous that she chooses his work in the tat shop. Who doesn't want some hot sexin after getting inked - I know I did! Hot lemon, too, so thanks!
7/28/2009 c1 jennayg123
So I saw that this story was called Broken Strings and in my review I was going to ask if you had heard the song...and bam! There it is! LOVE that song! And I loved your story! Edward is so sweet!
So I saw that this story was called Broken Strings and in my review I was going to ask if you had heard the song...and bam! There it is! LOVE that song! And I loved your story! Edward is so sweet!
7/28/2009 c1 grammaticallyincorrect
OMG! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY!
LOVE HOW SHE BROKE UP WITH JAKE! HE TOTALLY DESERVED IT! THAT JERK!
I AM SO GLAD YOU ENTERED THIS CONTEST! I HOPE YOU FREAKING WIN!
IF ANYONE SAYS ANYTHING BAD ABOUT THIS STORY I'LL PERSONALLY KICK THEIR ASSES!
3 your NUMBER 1 FAN!
GRAMMATICALLYINCORRECT!
OMG! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY!
LOVE HOW SHE BROKE UP WITH JAKE! HE TOTALLY DESERVED IT! THAT JERK!
I AM SO GLAD YOU ENTERED THIS CONTEST! I HOPE YOU FREAKING WIN!
IF ANYONE SAYS ANYTHING BAD ABOUT THIS STORY I'LL PERSONALLY KICK THEIR ASSES!
3 your NUMBER 1 FAN!
GRAMMATICALLYINCORRECT!