for Broken Strings7/28/2009 c1 Prpurpledragon
I love this one shot, Bella received not only Edward's artistic talents but his Love Making Talents as well. You did a really good job. I really am glad you entered the contest. I am very PROUD OF YOU!3
I love this one shot, Bella received not only Edward's artistic talents but his Love Making Talents as well. You did a really good job. I really am glad you entered the contest. I am very PROUD OF YOU!3
7/28/2009 c1 
2TwilightMundi
Hm. I'm not sure about this story. It has some good parts, but the premise is so far-fetched as to be almost annoying. And the writing isn't great. Some contractions would make for more comfortable reading.
I have to say, though, that this story has the best break-up scene I've ever read.
2TwilightMundiHm. I'm not sure about this story. It has some good parts, but the premise is so far-fetched as to be almost annoying. And the writing isn't great. Some contractions would make for more comfortable reading.
I have to say, though, that this story has the best break-up scene I've ever read.
7/28/2009 c1 10esthermarie
Good job my dear. I liked the song you used! Very sad and really excellent! I hope you win!
Love ya! :D
10esthermarieGood job my dear. I liked the song you used! Very sad and really excellent! I hope you win!
Love ya! :D