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4/30/2011 c1 Azrael200
Wow...damn powerful stuff.

I like how you illustrated the internal struggle, how she had choices that were not really choices, how she was free yet still trapped in a world that wasn't made for her.

And how you portrayal her struggles without making her sound pathetic, just scared, alone and with nowhere to go.

Loving it.
11/9/2009 c1 MaestroHex
I think it was beutiful.

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