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31violetkisses
aww!~ do you really have no plans of updating this? please update! i love the story,
31violetkissesaww!~ do you really have no plans of updating this? please update! i love the story,
10/28/2010 c4 14Beckett Simpleton
hmm. i don't usually read Ms that are like this (I mean with a lot of sex scenes in) but asides from the grammar it is weirdly good...
14Beckett Simpletonhmm. i don't usually read Ms that are like this (I mean with a lot of sex scenes in) but asides from the grammar it is weirdly good...
9/4/2010 c4 8Jaybee4
Oh, please please PLEASE update soon. I fell in love with this story right after the first chapter. It's amazing! X3! Amos is a great character :3
8Jaybee4Oh, please please PLEASE update soon. I fell in love with this story right after the first chapter. It's amazing! X3! Amos is a great character :3
6/25/2010 c1 6D. J. Samuel
Well I would never thought that I will read slash with Artemis Fowl, because, you know, you need at least two young males to do that, and this series has only the protagonist. But you managed it with a sex-addicted original character :)
I suppose, it is as the saying goes: if you can imagine it, there is porn to it.
6D. J. SamuelWell I would never thought that I will read slash with Artemis Fowl, because, you know, you need at least two young males to do that, and this series has only the protagonist. But you managed it with a sex-addicted original character :)
I suppose, it is as the saying goes: if you can imagine it, there is porn to it.
11/16/2009 c4 PrepossessingLiz
yays~! i luvs this story~! hurry up and make another chapter soon or else who knows what other pervy things my mind will come up with! AH! its starting!
u know what would be kewl? if u brought in an unexpected twist- a girl. a girl that randomely transfers to St. Bartlebees (however u spell it) and starts getting in Amos's way of Artemis. like flirting and stuff. so u know that then Amos would have to kick her off her high-horse as well.
mwaahahahaaha... yes that would be lovely. I think that that would make the storie a whole hech-of-a-lot more fun. PM me if u decide to use meh idea please!
yays~! i luvs this story~! hurry up and make another chapter soon or else who knows what other pervy things my mind will come up with! AH! its starting!
u know what would be kewl? if u brought in an unexpected twist- a girl. a girl that randomely transfers to St. Bartlebees (however u spell it) and starts getting in Amos's way of Artemis. like flirting and stuff. so u know that then Amos would have to kick her off her high-horse as well.
mwaahahahaaha... yes that would be lovely. I think that that would make the storie a whole hech-of-a-lot more fun. PM me if u decide to use meh idea please!
9/28/2009 c3 6MasterOfGrey
Whoo, now that's an interesting twist at the end there.
Apart from the odd spelling or grammar error you're an excellent writer.
6MasterOfGreyWhoo, now that's an interesting twist at the end there.
Apart from the odd spelling or grammar error you're an excellent writer.
9/26/2009 c3 Celastrina
OHH! Suspense~! I love it. x3
I like how you've made Amos all secretive leaving me going, now what the heck does he want? How is he doing this? Gives everyone who reads it something to really think on.
I think Artemis is very in character(Except for his 'moments of obedience.' But it's to be expected. XD)
AND! YOU are one of the blessed people who know a spell check button exists. All your grammar seems to be correct as well.
Now you've brought Holly in~ ^.^
I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter~!
OHH! Suspense~! I love it. x3
I like how you've made Amos all secretive leaving me going, now what the heck does he want? How is he doing this? Gives everyone who reads it something to really think on.
I think Artemis is very in character(Except for his 'moments of obedience.' But it's to be expected. XD)
AND! YOU are one of the blessed people who know a spell check button exists. All your grammar seems to be correct as well.
Now you've brought Holly in~ ^.^
I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter~!
9/24/2009 c2 PrepossessingLiz
wow, ur pretty good. but id like to request that you add some moor plot into it. like... have opal make contact again, or at least explain how Amos mezmerised him, if he was in fact, wearing reflective contact lenses. oh, you could have him have special abilities because Opal gave them to him. and you have to make artemiss crack, id really like to see him go mad... i know, im such a sadistic person... XD
wow, ur pretty good. but id like to request that you add some moor plot into it. like... have opal make contact again, or at least explain how Amos mezmerised him, if he was in fact, wearing reflective contact lenses. oh, you could have him have special abilities because Opal gave them to him. and you have to make artemiss crack, id really like to see him go mad... i know, im such a sadistic person... XD
9/7/2009 c2 9Ms.Ginny Snape
Oh god I've missed this fandom.
This story is amazing. I love stories like these. Artemis does need to be knocked down a knotch.
Keep writin'!
9Ms.Ginny SnapeOh god I've missed this fandom.
This story is amazing. I love stories like these. Artemis does need to be knocked down a knotch.
Keep writin'!
9/3/2009 c2 8CieloCrimisi
It was intriguing, but it feels like there's too many unanswered questions. What the hell IS Amos? Also, where the hell did Eric even come from? Who were the "others" he referred to? Why did Opal let him live, especially without mind wiping him? Why is he from the future? It feels like you have all the elements for a huge long story but then left it a one-shot (or two-shot, as the case may be). Also, I noticed you leave out a lot of apostrophes from possessive nouns. Plus, when writing out dialogue it's supposed to be punctuated like this:
"...things," he said.
NOT:
"...things." He said.
But yeah. I think you should continue developing the plot line. =]
8CieloCrimisiIt was intriguing, but it feels like there's too many unanswered questions. What the hell IS Amos? Also, where the hell did Eric even come from? Who were the "others" he referred to? Why did Opal let him live, especially without mind wiping him? Why is he from the future? It feels like you have all the elements for a huge long story but then left it a one-shot (or two-shot, as the case may be). Also, I noticed you leave out a lot of apostrophes from possessive nouns. Plus, when writing out dialogue it's supposed to be punctuated like this:
"...things," he said.
NOT:
"...things." He said.
But yeah. I think you should continue developing the plot line. =]
8/15/2009 c1 1ViolentAi
Rawr! Very sexy and well-written. I think this one deserves at least an epilogue! Pretty please?
1ViolentAiRawr! Very sexy and well-written. I think this one deserves at least an epilogue! Pretty please?
7/29/2009 c1 2Artemis.the.sign.painter
quite interesting i cant wait for the next chapter please do continue
2Artemis.the.sign.painterquite interesting i cant wait for the next chapter please do continue