
8/27/2009 c3 BloodFireAlchEMisT
I love it! Great job!
The plot's already twisting and turning and the characters' feelings are being described perfectly.
Can't wait for the next chapter! =]
I love it! Great job!
The plot's already twisting and turning and the characters' feelings are being described perfectly.
Can't wait for the next chapter! =]
8/4/2009 c3 rosebud23
What a twist! The chapter title certainly fits. And why was Hermione crying, does she know? This is certainly going to be interesting to see how it plays out with Draco trying to keep Hermione's trust and do his bidding for Voldermort. Have fun on your trip, can't wait for more!
What a twist! The chapter title certainly fits. And why was Hermione crying, does she know? This is certainly going to be interesting to see how it plays out with Draco trying to keep Hermione's trust and do his bidding for Voldermort. Have fun on your trip, can't wait for more!
7/31/2009 c2 rosebud23
This is quite awesome! I feel kind of sad that Harry is dead and Ron of all people killed him, but it certainly garnered my attention and interest in the first chapter! The chemistry between Hermione and Draco is just brilliant as well. The whole him leaving her pregnant thing is plausible. Definitely intense as well that he's been ordered to kill her. Anyways, I very much enjoyed these two chapters to read and can't wait how the rest of the story plays out!
This is quite awesome! I feel kind of sad that Harry is dead and Ron of all people killed him, but it certainly garnered my attention and interest in the first chapter! The chemistry between Hermione and Draco is just brilliant as well. The whole him leaving her pregnant thing is plausible. Definitely intense as well that he's been ordered to kill her. Anyways, I very much enjoyed these two chapters to read and can't wait how the rest of the story plays out!
7/31/2009 c1 Tinaxx
hmm, interesting. a little unexplained but hopefully the next chapter will fill in the missing blanks. i'll be waiting.
-Tina
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hmm, interesting. a little unexplained but hopefully the next chapter will fill in the missing blanks. i'll be waiting.
-Tina
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7/30/2009 c1 Draco's Favorite Mudblood
i loved it! i'll be counting the hours until the next chappie comes out o_-
great work!
i loved it! i'll be counting the hours until the next chappie comes out o_-
great work!
7/29/2009 c1 EssenceofLove
this is good. i like it. can't wait to read more.
"the fastest broom in the world wouldn’t be able to circle around your ego without wearing itself out" haha ^_^ funniness!
update ASAP!
this is good. i like it. can't wait to read more.
"the fastest broom in the world wouldn’t be able to circle around your ego without wearing itself out" haha ^_^ funniness!
update ASAP!
7/29/2009 c1
4Wand Child
Well to be honest i quite liked it. The only thing that was mildly irritating was the use of American slang words such as 'gotten' etc. I'm not trying to offend you, the writing was good and i like where the story is going, i'm jumping to the comclusion that you're American here.
Are you making the characters American or are they just in New York hiding out?
Good job though, you're story's on my alert list :)

Well to be honest i quite liked it. The only thing that was mildly irritating was the use of American slang words such as 'gotten' etc. I'm not trying to offend you, the writing was good and i like where the story is going, i'm jumping to the comclusion that you're American here.
Are you making the characters American or are they just in New York hiding out?
Good job though, you're story's on my alert list :)