
6/10/2010 c3 Somebody
Love the story so far! can't wait for you to update!
Love the story so far! can't wait for you to update!
11/27/2009 c3
5Sarcastic Nightmare
i liked it! I can't wait to see what happens with Hinata and the rest of them. Please update soon! =)

i liked it! I can't wait to see what happens with Hinata and the rest of them. Please update soon! =)
11/27/2009 c1
6CoffeeLover13
WOW! this is really good! I could feel how upset she was! I am looking forward to seeing where this will go! also on a side note i really like the pen name you chose! anyway! some realistic feelings going on here! AWESOME!

WOW! this is really good! I could feel how upset she was! I am looking forward to seeing where this will go! also on a side note i really like the pen name you chose! anyway! some realistic feelings going on here! AWESOME!
11/27/2009 c3
6I'm Not Psychotic. I'm Gifted
My only critique would be the changing of pronouns. At some points it sounds as though Sasuke is speaking, while most of the time, it's narration.
Other than that, I'm really enjoying it. =]
[And no, Sasuke wasn't too something. I thought you wrote him very well.]

My only critique would be the changing of pronouns. At some points it sounds as though Sasuke is speaking, while most of the time, it's narration.
Other than that, I'm really enjoying it. =]
[And no, Sasuke wasn't too something. I thought you wrote him very well.]
11/2/2009 c2
5Sarcastic Nightmare
I like it. The summary really hooked me and I like how Hinata is going against her father in this. Awesome start and please update soon!

I like it. The summary really hooked me and I like how Hinata is going against her father in this. Awesome start and please update soon!
11/2/2009 c2 kisa
i like where this story is going but i would like to know when the Sasuhina will come in. i really hope you continue the story and i hope you update soon! :)
i like where this story is going but i would like to know when the Sasuhina will come in. i really hope you continue the story and i hope you update soon! :)
10/29/2009 c2
4Dominican Kitsune
Ooh! This is interesting! I reread chapter one so I could remember what this was all about and I must say I am liking what I am reading! I hope you update soon!

Ooh! This is interesting! I reread chapter one so I could remember what this was all about and I must say I am liking what I am reading! I hope you update soon!