7/9/2013 c6 AuroraBlix
I suggest working "Zombie Slide" by ICP in somewhere. *shrugs* If you like it, anyway.
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I suggest working "Zombie Slide" by ICP in somewhere. *shrugs* If you like it, anyway.
: )
7/9/2013 c5 AuroraBlix
I love that song just because my sister introduced it to me knowing that I'd turn BRIGHT red... And I did.
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I love that song just because my sister introduced it to me knowing that I'd turn BRIGHT red... And I did.
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7/9/2013 c4 AuroraBlix
... Continuity error: You established already that she uses an MP3 player, so why did she shut down her iPod? As an archenemy of all things Apple-based, I am offended.
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... Continuity error: You established already that she uses an MP3 player, so why did she shut down her iPod? As an archenemy of all things Apple-based, I am offended.
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6/27/2013 c21 Miss-Understood
Warren, you cutie! -
Warren: "I'm NOT cute."
Shuddup!
Anyway, I kind of want to see Warren and Lash say "eff it" and get into a powerless fight. Like "Let's settle this like real men!"
A good one might be Burn It To The Ground by Nickelback.
I Will Wait by Mumford and Sons
Broken Crown by Mumford and Sons (very Victoria-like)
That one Anarbor song, the one that goes "Without you, there's no reason for my story" (I think it's called Without You but I'm not 100% sure)
Freak Like Me by Halestorm
Life After You by Daughtry
I'd Come For You by Nickelback
This Afternoon by Nickelback
Warren, you cutie! -
Warren: "I'm NOT cute."
Shuddup!
Anyway, I kind of want to see Warren and Lash say "eff it" and get into a powerless fight. Like "Let's settle this like real men!"
A good one might be Burn It To The Ground by Nickelback.
I Will Wait by Mumford and Sons
Broken Crown by Mumford and Sons (very Victoria-like)
That one Anarbor song, the one that goes "Without you, there's no reason for my story" (I think it's called Without You but I'm not 100% sure)
Freak Like Me by Halestorm
Life After You by Daughtry
I'd Come For You by Nickelback
This Afternoon by Nickelback
5/31/2013 c20 Guest
If it was as good as this then hell yeah!
If it was as good as this then hell yeah!
5/27/2013 c21 MarmeeDear
Yes I would read it if I knew the story, movie, book behind it. Your a good writer, I've really enjoyed this story.
Yes I would read it if I knew the story, movie, book behind it. Your a good writer, I've really enjoyed this story.
5/27/2013 c20 Moongrave
Hey you.
Yeah you!
When are you updating missy!
I re-read this whole thing and I expected more songs and stuff!
I'll be sending you more songs soon since my iTunes library has expanded greatly over the year(s?).
Though one song I was listening to while reading is Never Wanted To Dance by Mindless Self Indulgence.
It's heavy but I laughed a little when it came on while Layla was talking to Vicky.
There's a part where is says
"Never wanted to dance with nobody but you-
wouldn't take "no" for an answer, you f-ing b!tch!"
I get that writing again can be discouraging when you lose a chapter and stuff.
I stopped writing because my laptop was in my boyfriends car when it was impounded and we couldn't pay for it back and it was in his parents names and they wouldn't help us so I lost my laptop, some electronics, clothes, and he lost his guitar and cd case. He hasn't really played since and I haven't written in a while. Though I have written a few paragraphs on my iPod.
Hey you.
Yeah you!
When are you updating missy!
I re-read this whole thing and I expected more songs and stuff!
I'll be sending you more songs soon since my iTunes library has expanded greatly over the year(s?).
Though one song I was listening to while reading is Never Wanted To Dance by Mindless Self Indulgence.
It's heavy but I laughed a little when it came on while Layla was talking to Vicky.
There's a part where is says
"Never wanted to dance with nobody but you-
wouldn't take "no" for an answer, you f-ing b!tch!"
I get that writing again can be discouraging when you lose a chapter and stuff.
I stopped writing because my laptop was in my boyfriends car when it was impounded and we couldn't pay for it back and it was in his parents names and they wouldn't help us so I lost my laptop, some electronics, clothes, and he lost his guitar and cd case. He hasn't really played since and I haven't written in a while. Though I have written a few paragraphs on my iPod.