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12Katrinka and Nori
Hey there Katrinka here, thats one hell of a hang over! I hope Warren learns his lesson, Escapeism is tempting but ends in pain. You keep improving with each chapter I am very impresed. And lastly Please Update Soon!
p.s. tost and ginger ale is what I thnk works best but thats a personal preferens.
12Katrinka and NoriHey there Katrinka here, thats one hell of a hang over! I hope Warren learns his lesson, Escapeism is tempting but ends in pain. You keep improving with each chapter I am very impresed. And lastly Please Update Soon!
p.s. tost and ginger ale is what I thnk works best but thats a personal preferens.
7/11/2011 c14 Katrinka and Nori
Katrinka the Great here, Very good, loving Victoria's personal growth great touch! And your compleatly right about the coffee doing nothing for inebriation, the only thing to do for a drunk is to let it run out of their system by its self. However I learned from The 'Myth Busters' not any schoole course. The fun way to learn science. :D
Katrinka the Great here, Very good, loving Victoria's personal growth great touch! And your compleatly right about the coffee doing nothing for inebriation, the only thing to do for a drunk is to let it run out of their system by its self. However I learned from The 'Myth Busters' not any schoole course. The fun way to learn science. :D
7/11/2011 c13 Katrinka and Nori
Hey there, Katrinka here. It was cool of you to reconize my comments thanks! I was worried i was being to critical. Great chapter, though if I were you I'd utilize spell check. I am a horrible speller as well and I see you making the same mistakes that I make. Other than that wonderful.
Hey there, Katrinka here. It was cool of you to reconize my comments thanks! I was worried i was being to critical. Great chapter, though if I were you I'd utilize spell check. I am a horrible speller as well and I see you making the same mistakes that I make. Other than that wonderful.
7/11/2011 c15 8Talis Ruadair
I really hope there will be more Warren and Vicky interaction in the next chapter. I really liked this chapter and I cannot wait to see where this goes next.
8Talis RuadairI really hope there will be more Warren and Vicky interaction in the next chapter. I really liked this chapter and I cannot wait to see where this goes next.
7/10/2011 c14 gothicluver13
Victoria is really smart when it comes to knowing what to do to take care of drunk people and the way she handled it so calmly makes me think that she not only knows that stuff from her health class but also from personal experience. I have to agree with Layla though about probably not letting anyone puke on my bed except maybe a boyfriend. I love how Layla freaked about listening to Victoria's mp3 and I would have reacted and said the same thing that Victoria did. Can't wait to see how Warren reacts when he wakes up again and hopefully Victoria is either asleep or awake and not staring at him cuz I don't know about him or anyone else but it freaks me out to wake up to someone staring at me. Hope you update again soon!
Victoria is really smart when it comes to knowing what to do to take care of drunk people and the way she handled it so calmly makes me think that she not only knows that stuff from her health class but also from personal experience. I have to agree with Layla though about probably not letting anyone puke on my bed except maybe a boyfriend. I love how Layla freaked about listening to Victoria's mp3 and I would have reacted and said the same thing that Victoria did. Can't wait to see how Warren reacts when he wakes up again and hopefully Victoria is either asleep or awake and not staring at him cuz I don't know about him or anyone else but it freaks me out to wake up to someone staring at me. Hope you update again soon!
7/7/2011 c14 MidoriPoet
This chapter was lovely and delightful. It was cool how Victoria knew what to do in the alcohol situation.
This chapter was lovely and delightful. It was cool how Victoria knew what to do in the alcohol situation.
7/7/2011 c14 8Talis Ruadair
Uh oh, he’s lying on his back now. Perhaps he’s past puking. I wonder if him gaining consciousness for a moment meant that his body was beginning to burn of the alcohol once more, or maybe they did put roofies in the punch after all. You know that’d make sense. I understand you stated that he had to have drink quite a bit of alcohol before it takes effect because of his higher than normal body temperature, but what if one of the chicks at the party wanted her way with him and slipped a roofy in his drink? I think it’d make more sense why he was unconscious. Also gaining consciousness like that but losing it again.
I have to admit that I don’t know too much about these things except that according to the Hangover roofies cause a person to completely black out, but wouldn’t that be the icing on the cake? Warren’s dealing with the anniversary of his father going to jail, he’s coping with his supposed betrayal of his father since he’s befriended his father’s enemy’s son, the Hippie forces him into admitting the reason for the way he’s acting and blackmails him to go to a party, at said party he decides to drink away his pain, and a chick sees Warren Peace drinking and thinks I’d like a piece of that but doesn’t realize he’s there with a friend, so she slips him a roofy. Said female’s plan backfires when the Hippie finds him and doesn’t leave his side long enough for her to take advantage of her drugging, and all hope goes out the window when Vicky disappears with the two of them.
I know I’m going off on a wild tangent, but don’t you think some desperate female might pull something like that with the unapproachable Warren? Now the next question is what type of crick is Vicky going to have in her neck when she’s wakes up in the morning. Also how’s Warren going to react when the light starts pulling in and his hangover hits him full force. Is he going to have to puke right away or he just going to have a headache from hell? One can never know until you write that next chapter. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.
8Talis RuadairUh oh, he’s lying on his back now. Perhaps he’s past puking. I wonder if him gaining consciousness for a moment meant that his body was beginning to burn of the alcohol once more, or maybe they did put roofies in the punch after all. You know that’d make sense. I understand you stated that he had to have drink quite a bit of alcohol before it takes effect because of his higher than normal body temperature, but what if one of the chicks at the party wanted her way with him and slipped a roofy in his drink? I think it’d make more sense why he was unconscious. Also gaining consciousness like that but losing it again.
I have to admit that I don’t know too much about these things except that according to the Hangover roofies cause a person to completely black out, but wouldn’t that be the icing on the cake? Warren’s dealing with the anniversary of his father going to jail, he’s coping with his supposed betrayal of his father since he’s befriended his father’s enemy’s son, the Hippie forces him into admitting the reason for the way he’s acting and blackmails him to go to a party, at said party he decides to drink away his pain, and a chick sees Warren Peace drinking and thinks I’d like a piece of that but doesn’t realize he’s there with a friend, so she slips him a roofy. Said female’s plan backfires when the Hippie finds him and doesn’t leave his side long enough for her to take advantage of her drugging, and all hope goes out the window when Vicky disappears with the two of them.
I know I’m going off on a wild tangent, but don’t you think some desperate female might pull something like that with the unapproachable Warren? Now the next question is what type of crick is Vicky going to have in her neck when she’s wakes up in the morning. Also how’s Warren going to react when the light starts pulling in and his hangover hits him full force. Is he going to have to puke right away or he just going to have a headache from hell? One can never know until you write that next chapter. I cannot wait to see where you go with this.
7/6/2011 c14 15ChaoticLogic
Another good chapter! I can't wait for the next one as for song suggestions...hmm...I'm pretty fond of that new one from Panic! at the Disco 'let's kill tonight' if you haven't heard it check it out! Also... a personal fav of mine 'lollipop' but the Framing Hanley remake! and finally 'tonight tonight' by Hot Chelle Rae that one might actually be a good one for the next chapter? check them I hope they help!
15ChaoticLogicAnother good chapter! I can't wait for the next one as for song suggestions...hmm...I'm pretty fond of that new one from Panic! at the Disco 'let's kill tonight' if you haven't heard it check it out! Also... a personal fav of mine 'lollipop' but the Framing Hanley remake! and finally 'tonight tonight' by Hot Chelle Rae that one might actually be a good one for the next chapter? check them I hope they help!
7/6/2011 c14 The Raven of Never-Nevermore
great chapter, it's funny to see how Layla reacts in that situation because her character seems like she wouldn't be at parties with drinking normally, the best thing is that you kept Layla in character as well :)
maybe for a song: Just Close Your Eyes by Story of the Year?
great chapter, it's funny to see how Layla reacts in that situation because her character seems like she wouldn't be at parties with drinking normally, the best thing is that you kept Layla in character as well :)
maybe for a song: Just Close Your Eyes by Story of the Year?