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1Musik Drache
Wow, her dad is...overprotective, I suppose would be the word. Please, continue.
1Musik DracheWow, her dad is...overprotective, I suppose would be the word. Please, continue.
7/2/2011 c13 4Miss Bonnie Madness
This is so good~ I wonder what Warren's going to do when he comes to. Or when Victoria's dad walks through the door with a drunk kid in the middle of their living room. Oh my, the possibilites. Update soon! :D
4Miss Bonnie MadnessThis is so good~ I wonder what Warren's going to do when he comes to. Or when Victoria's dad walks through the door with a drunk kid in the middle of their living room. Oh my, the possibilites. Update soon! :D
7/1/2011 c13 gothicluver13
Great chapter! She should be a lawyer like Layla said,that would be cool and she'd be good at it. I don't even want to know how much Warren had to drink to get like he is. Love how you used Highway To Hell! If I was her I probably would have punched someone if they were trying to take my clothes off while I was pushing my way through them to get to my friends. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Great chapter! She should be a lawyer like Layla said,that would be cool and she'd be good at it. I don't even want to know how much Warren had to drink to get like he is. Love how you used Highway To Hell! If I was her I probably would have punched someone if they were trying to take my clothes off while I was pushing my way through them to get to my friends. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
6/30/2011 c13 The Raven of Never-Nevermore
this is a great story, i just wonder when is Victoria gonna show what her powers are because you never really revealed what they are
can't wait to read more :) i like how the songs always seemed to describe the situation that's happening
this is a great story, i just wonder when is Victoria gonna show what her powers are because you never really revealed what they are
can't wait to read more :) i like how the songs always seemed to describe the situation that's happening
6/30/2011 c13 8Talis Ruadair
Hmm, a drunk Warren. This could be fun except for the probably drank so much he might have alcohol poisioning. I have a feeling we'll have a very angry or maybe just upset Warren on our hands when he wakes up. He's probably going to be a bit disorented and trying to figure out where the hell he is. Also are they going to put him on the couch or are they going to put him in a guest room? Also what if her parents come home early and find one said guy in their house. This could be an opprotunity for caous. Also why is Warren so off about his dad's annaversary? Does it stem from abadnonment issues? The fact that his life went to hell when his dad was sent to jail? I see cold towl being pressed to his forhead and him waking up with one hell of a headache, but I'm not psychic either so who knows.
8Talis RuadairHmm, a drunk Warren. This could be fun except for the probably drank so much he might have alcohol poisioning. I have a feeling we'll have a very angry or maybe just upset Warren on our hands when he wakes up. He's probably going to be a bit disorented and trying to figure out where the hell he is. Also are they going to put him on the couch or are they going to put him in a guest room? Also what if her parents come home early and find one said guy in their house. This could be an opprotunity for caous. Also why is Warren so off about his dad's annaversary? Does it stem from abadnonment issues? The fact that his life went to hell when his dad was sent to jail? I see cold towl being pressed to his forhead and him waking up with one hell of a headache, but I'm not psychic either so who knows.
6/30/2011 c13 MidoriPoet
Nice. Great chapter, but I'm curious. How much can a pyrokinetic drink to actually get himself drunk?
Nice. Great chapter, but I'm curious. How much can a pyrokinetic drink to actually get himself drunk?
6/29/2011 c12 4Miss Bonnie Madness
Oh. My. God. You have to update! Soon! And I want to know what is going down at this party, for real! Write more soon. (:
4Miss Bonnie MadnessOh. My. God. You have to update! Soon! And I want to know what is going down at this party, for real! Write more soon. (:
6/29/2011 c12 gothicluver13
Thanks for the props :) Love the Psycho by Puddle of Mudd by the way,it's an awesome song! I love the sarcasm in this chapter and in the story period! Can't wait to see if she can help with what's going on with Warren. Hope you get to update soon!
Thanks for the props :) Love the Psycho by Puddle of Mudd by the way,it's an awesome song! I love the sarcasm in this chapter and in the story period! Can't wait to see if she can help with what's going on with Warren. Hope you get to update soon!
6/28/2011 c12 12Katrinka and Nori
OK Love the idea, writting is good, you've got good diolog, and plot. I'm not fond of most of your musical choices but thats a matter of personal preferens (I'm a swing, standerds, blues, and jazz kinda girl. Nat King Cole is the greatest.)but over all a solid peice of work. A few notes, Victoria's powers have not been explained clearly. You hinted at somthing to do with sound but we have yet to have an acctual example. You also kinda just left off with the Speed and Lash line, I'm not any fan of their's but it dose leave a bit of a plot hole. Lastly a bit more developement in Victoria, a history of sorts would be welcome and mabye help her synk up with the already established group. PLEASE DO NOT ABANDON THIS STORY! I'm really enjoying it.
Keep up the good work.
Katrinka the Great
12Katrinka and NoriOK Love the idea, writting is good, you've got good diolog, and plot. I'm not fond of most of your musical choices but thats a matter of personal preferens (I'm a swing, standerds, blues, and jazz kinda girl. Nat King Cole is the greatest.)but over all a solid peice of work. A few notes, Victoria's powers have not been explained clearly. You hinted at somthing to do with sound but we have yet to have an acctual example. You also kinda just left off with the Speed and Lash line, I'm not any fan of their's but it dose leave a bit of a plot hole. Lastly a bit more developement in Victoria, a history of sorts would be welcome and mabye help her synk up with the already established group. PLEASE DO NOT ABANDON THIS STORY! I'm really enjoying it.
Keep up the good work.
Katrinka the Great
6/28/2011 c12 MidoriPoet
I loved the phone conversation with her mom, that was hilarious. :') I'm curious about what happens for the next chapter, so please update soon.
I loved the phone conversation with her mom, that was hilarious. :') I'm curious about what happens for the next chapter, so please update soon.
6/28/2011 c12 15ChaoticLogic
Hey! Looking forward to the next chapter! Since this is one of my fav Warren stories I hope that you don't take too long!
15ChaoticLogicHey! Looking forward to the next chapter! Since this is one of my fav Warren stories I hope that you don't take too long!