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2/16/2017 c1 595Ghostwriter
I love it. Well done.
9/20/2011 c1 14MidnightHalcyon
Awesome story.
6/30/2011 c1 8Hawkslayer
I enjoyed this story as it is generally well written and the characterisation is excellent. The only thing I disliked is your constant use of 'thru'- a terrible misspelling of 'through'. While one such misspelling is acceptable, several are not and require the use of a spell checker. This seems to be a rather odd anomaly, however, as otherwise your spelling is good. Well done on the story, I do love Eliot whump. :)
10/31/2010 c1 62medicgirl
Excellent story. I love Eliot torture-fics, and this one was particularly creative. Well done :)
5/27/2010 c1 Barbara P
Your first story? That seems hard to believe! I love hurt/comfort stories and this one was outstanding! I must admit I dislike the slash "pairing" hurt/comfort - I firmly believe all the team members are het and I don't care for the romantic nonsense in those types of stories, good or bad. I much prefer this kind where we see the team's respect and genuine affection for each other growing. Eliot may growl and grumble but deep down I think he's a marshmellow when it comes to his teammates and I think you really captured that aspect of his personality. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
8/24/2009 c1 148divine one
well written... raw...

gotta love eliot yeah!
8/10/2009 c1 69Touch of the Wind
Such a sad and emotional oneshot...I love the focus on Elliot and Sophie! So powerful!
8/5/2009 c1 19whimseyrhodes
Loved it, absolutely LOVED it! *adding to favorites*

It's totally believable that Eliot would sacrifice himself for Sophie, because he sees her as a lady, but not in a weak way. It's just his southern gentlemanly ways. And how wrong is it for me to love the torture scenes? Sick, I tell ya, sick. (but wonderful!) And the comfort at the end...aw.

Great job! =^.^=
8/1/2009 c1 48ASiriuslyGleekyTimeLord
That was really well written. I don't know why but for some reason, I am taking to Eliot torture stories...kind of morbid, but they're all really well written! Great job!
8/1/2009 c1 33Goody
This was great. Very intense and I loved the double torture, and Eliot being a protector even as he was being tortured as well.

The team looking after him was very touching, and your amount of detail and action had a really good balance. Really great for a first published story, thoroughly enjoyable.

One thing though, PWP is generally accepted as standing for Porn Without Plot, and as this story has a plot, and is not porn you might want to take that out of your summary, just thought I'd let you know.

Really enjoyed though. Goody.

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