for Moving Forward4/18/2011 c6 Zelda Maximus
Please update! I must know what happens! This story is amazing! I absolutely love it!
Please update! I must know what happens! This story is amazing! I absolutely love it!
4/18/2011 c5 Zelda Maximus
And the plot thickens. I feel bad for Reg but at the same time he doesn't have to get the dark mark. Wonderful chapter!
And the plot thickens. I feel bad for Reg but at the same time he doesn't have to get the dark mark. Wonderful chapter!
4/18/2011 c2 Zelda Maximus
I like that their relationship is realistic and it doesn't rush through and whatnot.
I like that their relationship is realistic and it doesn't rush through and whatnot.
12/24/2009 c6 LadyStrider17
Than Lance Zabini character is really funny. Sort of the light humor that the story needs to distract from the darkness.
Nice to see that you've updated and that the story is moving on. Happy holidays!
Than Lance Zabini character is really funny. Sort of the light humor that the story needs to distract from the darkness.
Nice to see that you've updated and that the story is moving on. Happy holidays!
8/29/2009 c5 LadyStrider17
Classes. Lol! That's what has taken me so long to review. :P
This chapter was a little weird for me. I don't think Lucius would so readily show his Mark off to everyone. Let alone mention what Voldemort can do.
And in this chapter it has O. instead of O.W.L.s. Lol, that threw me off a bit when I was reading.
The time change from September to December was really quick. And when Noelle left him standing there at the end, it didn't really seem too sad because the time they spent together was so short. Or rather it was like the time they were with each other was so short because it wasn't described to much.
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I hope I don't sound to critisizing with this review, because I certainly am not intending to!
But overall the chapter was good! I liked how Reg called getting the Dark Mark just recieving an old family heirloom. And I can not wait for the next chapter for this story!
Classes. Lol! That's what has taken me so long to review. :P
This chapter was a little weird for me. I don't think Lucius would so readily show his Mark off to everyone. Let alone mention what Voldemort can do.
And in this chapter it has O. instead of O.W.L.s. Lol, that threw me off a bit when I was reading.
The time change from September to December was really quick. And when Noelle left him standing there at the end, it didn't really seem too sad because the time they spent together was so short. Or rather it was like the time they were with each other was so short because it wasn't described to much.
...
I hope I don't sound to critisizing with this review, because I certainly am not intending to!
But overall the chapter was good! I liked how Reg called getting the Dark Mark just recieving an old family heirloom. And I can not wait for the next chapter for this story!
8/29/2009 c5 
30chronicxxinsanity
Awe, I knew Noelle had to find out sometime, but that was still sad. :/ Please keep writing. :) Even if it is around your classes and homework. I can wait.
30chronicxxinsanityAwe, I knew Noelle had to find out sometime, but that was still sad. :/ Please keep writing. :) Even if it is around your classes and homework. I can wait.
8/12/2009 c4 LadyStrider17
Indeed it does thicken!
It's nice to see that Sirius is making an attempt to help out Reg, even if it's just with romance issues. Shows that he does care and didn't completely abandon Regulus.
And Noelle surprised me a bit when she was so bold to Narcissa. One point for the Ravenclaw!
I'm interested to see his conversion to Death Eater and over to the dark side in general. It will definitely add tension to the relationships all around him.
Good chapter! I can't wait till the next one.
Indeed it does thicken!
It's nice to see that Sirius is making an attempt to help out Reg, even if it's just with romance issues. Shows that he does care and didn't completely abandon Regulus.
And Noelle surprised me a bit when she was so bold to Narcissa. One point for the Ravenclaw!
I'm interested to see his conversion to Death Eater and over to the dark side in general. It will definitely add tension to the relationships all around him.
Good chapter! I can't wait till the next one.
8/11/2009 c1 1VanillaVanilla
I just read Until the End of Time and all four chapters of Moving Forward in one sitting. Your writing is so simple, yet moves fluidly; I absolutely adore it. Not only that I love the way you portray Regulus; it's just how I imagined him. I'm also glad because Noelle and I share a name :] I cannot wait to see where Until the End of Time will go and await future chapters. Keep up the good work!
- - -Wishingpool
1VanillaVanillaI just read Until the End of Time and all four chapters of Moving Forward in one sitting. Your writing is so simple, yet moves fluidly; I absolutely adore it. Not only that I love the way you portray Regulus; it's just how I imagined him. I'm also glad because Noelle and I share a name :] I cannot wait to see where Until the End of Time will go and await future chapters. Keep up the good work!
- - -Wishingpool
8/7/2009 c3 LadyStrider17
Reg being scared of the ghoul in the attic. How cute!
Hmm and I can't believe Noelle's parents let Reg stay in bed with her. How fluffy.
Yay, the plot's starting; I can't wait!
And this story is officially on my alerts now. It's much easier than having to search 'Regulus Black' everytime I enter the site.
Good luck with getting sorted on all your back to school stuff! I've been preparing also. School starts next Monday!
Reg being scared of the ghoul in the attic. How cute!
Hmm and I can't believe Noelle's parents let Reg stay in bed with her. How fluffy.
Yay, the plot's starting; I can't wait!
And this story is officially on my alerts now. It's much easier than having to search 'Regulus Black' everytime I enter the site.
Good luck with getting sorted on all your back to school stuff! I've been preparing also. School starts next Monday!
8/7/2009 c2 LadyStrider17
Aha! How perfect for them to spend the rest of the summer together. Perhaps things will happen? *wiggle eyebrows* Lol.
And I like the touch of Noelle's dad giving him a stern talking to.
Great chapter!
Aha! How perfect for them to spend the rest of the summer together. Perhaps things will happen? *wiggle eyebrows* Lol.
And I like the touch of Noelle's dad giving him a stern talking to.
Great chapter!