for Trying to Find the Truth9/11/2009 c1 
12Ephemeral Muse
your story's realy awesome! :D I like everything...well most of everything.
One thing that is just SO ANNOYING is that fact that you keep using the wrong "to". When you say, "I have to", it's not " I have too." Get it? You keep using "too" for everything. You might wanna look it up or something.
other than that, i love your story. :]
12Ephemeral Museyour story's realy awesome! :D I like everything...well most of everything.
One thing that is just SO ANNOYING is that fact that you keep using the wrong "to". When you say, "I have to", it's not " I have too." Get it? You keep using "too" for everything. You might wanna look it up or something.
other than that, i love your story. :]
8/5/2009 c2 meerla11
you should write your story with more details because lack of details equals boring fic and there were grammar mistakes... dont get mad for this will help...try to read some stories...and observe, it will help you too
you should write your story with more details because lack of details equals boring fic and there were grammar mistakes... dont get mad for this will help...try to read some stories...and observe, it will help you too