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for The Enchanter and the five coincidences

10/17/2010 c18 Zicou
Awesome!

Continue,

Z.
10/17/2010 c18 2bakapervert
Thanks for the update.
10/16/2010 c18 mitremlap
Your story line is very interesting -it is just somewhat hard to find -

Perhaps outline the chapter before writing will help clarify the plot.
10/16/2010 c9 mitremlap
nice chapter, less confusing to read
10/16/2010 c18 alichi
This has got to be the longest Harry-Meets-Sirius scene-dialoge in all fanfiction history. It was funny but you certainly drew it out long past reasonable :P

Either way, looking forward to more mayhem.
10/9/2010 c17 idar
Good story, even though Harry is bit too crazy for me. The five coincidences must be the five years (cannon) in one.

I didn't read the interlude, I just hate interludes and I never read them.
9/23/2010 c17 pongolle
cool story so far. pongolle. lil confusing writing style though
9/16/2010 c15 1Unclouded
Just thought I'd inflate the review count to mention an unintentional error that threw me out of the story. After Harry takes out the map there's a line of text that just has a '.' in it. I assume based on your writing style that this was supposed to be a sentence or two about what was displayed on the map that can't be good but it doesn't show up so I assume either the site removed it or it was accidental erased somehow. Just thought I'd point that out.

Also earlier in the chapter (about two paragraphs above) has this sentence:

"I think I should come up with some kind of onomatopoeia now, but my hears can't seem to settle on a particular one at this moment in time."

Which should be "but my ears" I think. Other than that good wham chapter.
9/16/2010 c17 Unclouded
Definitely enjoying this version of Harry you have going. I especially enjoy his attitude and the way he refers to everyone by a single letter. Didn't much enjoy the 16th chapter but then I usually dislike omakes or interludes on habit. Very interested in where this story is going and hope you get back to updating on a monthly release at least. Thanks for the story so far.
9/15/2010 c2 Joe
and right there in your notes for this chapter is the reason why a lot of people DO NOT review, because authors of good stories like i think this one will be hold new chapters hostage for reviews. IF the reason you write is to get reviews then you SHOULD NOT BE writing at all
9/14/2010 c17 nk1
Really good story...

I guess some of the people must be complaining about your style of writing but go on to assume that they are completely unimaginative and inflexible.

Really insane Harry sometimes bordering on humorous =P ... Carry on the good work mate
9/13/2010 c17 loretta537
thank you for the update. i cant believe that moody destroyed hogwarts, or actually i cant believe that hogwarts could be destroyed so easily.
9/13/2010 c17 Skallaken
Funny and imaginative.
9/13/2010 c17 Schuikichiro
Can you please posts ppl's name at the beggining of chapter? it gets confusing as D, B , M or w/e else tehre was =P
9/12/2010 c17 2bakapervert
Thanks for the update. So Miss Fluffy is Padfoot?
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