for Taboo Tonight2/28/2013 c1 xxrxuxsxtxyx
I love this story please write more 10/10 btw i always ignore any grammar mistakes i read other reviews and they were talking about grammar mistakes but i couldnt care less if you have them or not like i said i ignore stuff like that so definetely 10/10
I love this story please write more 10/10 btw i always ignore any grammar mistakes i read other reviews and they were talking about grammar mistakes but i couldnt care less if you have them or not like i said i ignore stuff like that so definetely 10/10
6/2/2012 c1 
1JamesTouchdown
Hmm, this story was okay, though it could have used spellcheck and some variation during their union, like, say, a dildo? Even though it didn't give me much of an erection, you have made a valiant attempt at this pairing, I applaud you. 3/5
Keep writing,
Snow
1JamesTouchdownHmm, this story was okay, though it could have used spellcheck and some variation during their union, like, say, a dildo? Even though it didn't give me much of an erection, you have made a valiant attempt at this pairing, I applaud you. 3/5
Keep writing,
Snow
6/2/2012 c1 JamesTouchdown
Hmm, this story was okay, though it could have used spellcheck and some variation during their union, like, say, a dildo? Even though it didn't give me much of an erection, you have made a valiant attempt at this pairing, I applaud you. 3/5
Keep writing,
Snow
Hmm, this story was okay, though it could have used spellcheck and some variation during their union, like, say, a dildo? Even though it didn't give me much of an erection, you have made a valiant attempt at this pairing, I applaud you. 3/5
Keep writing,
Snow
4/29/2012 c1 3LuvleeCookieChan
lol. I wonder how Isshin would reach to THAT one! Weird, but interesting story and pairing.
3LuvleeCookieChanlol. I wonder how Isshin would reach to THAT one! Weird, but interesting story and pairing.
9/17/2011 c1 12MikuxLuka401
Well, it wasn't bad by any means, it was actually pretty good. However I would have liked it to have been longer with more plot and explanation. I'm just not that into PWP'S but good idea nonetheless.
Madrox out MMFWCL
12MikuxLuka401Well, it wasn't bad by any means, it was actually pretty good. However I would have liked it to have been longer with more plot and explanation. I'm just not that into PWP'S but good idea nonetheless.
Madrox out MMFWCL
8/1/2010 c1 1DarkAngel2345
this story was really good... i liked it alot... also... i've been working on one myself... for naruto... if you would plz read it and review... thnx
1DarkAngel2345this story was really good... i liked it alot... also... i've been working on one myself... for naruto... if you would plz read it and review... thnx
9/16/2009 c1 2Paradoxismminant
Eh...okay. A little better on the whole grammar aspect. But the computer coding/spacing thing is still a little odd.
Kudos for trying for improvement, though.
2ParadoxismminantEh...okay. A little better on the whole grammar aspect. But the computer coding/spacing thing is still a little odd.
Kudos for trying for improvement, though.
8/12/2009 c1 1lWhite foxl
i have to agree. it's good just not what i expected. sorry. it's different but i still liked it; although sadly it's not a favorite
1lWhite foxli have to agree. it's good just not what i expected. sorry. it's different but i still liked it; although sadly it's not a favorite
8/5/2009 c1 1Scythe Massakur
Well that was...odd...I shivered with revulsion afterwards. Not because of you, but because the story just was not what I had expected. Ugh. Lemme just give you a grade derived off writing ability rather than content. 6.8/10
1Scythe MassakurWell that was...odd...I shivered with revulsion afterwards. Not because of you, but because the story just was not what I had expected. Ugh. Lemme just give you a grade derived off writing ability rather than content. 6.8/10