
1/6/2018 c1 Gjosr
What
What
11/21/2017 c2 Toothless 1998
Scar's a creeper in this. I don't think Nala would fall for him.
Though everyone is entitled to their own opinion and this is fan fiction. So, if you are proud of your story, then good for you.
Scar's a creeper in this. I don't think Nala would fall for him.
Though everyone is entitled to their own opinion and this is fan fiction. So, if you are proud of your story, then good for you.
1/18/2017 c5 Me I just me
It says SIMBA instead of Mufasa
It says SIMBA instead of Mufasa
9/18/2014 c7 Guest
I'll admit, when I first started reading this, I was just a wee bit weirded out. But then, two or three chapters in, it all started to click. I like this perspective of things. Cheers!
I'll admit, when I first started reading this, I was just a wee bit weirded out. But then, two or three chapters in, it all started to click. I like this perspective of things. Cheers!
5/25/2013 c7 cheesecakebutternuts
Found this story way to late now I don't have the fun of waiting for a new chap, but that's cool cause this story is awesome and I want a sequel
Found this story way to late now I don't have the fun of waiting for a new chap, but that's cool cause this story is awesome and I want a sequel
7/24/2011 c1 thelionkinglover
hey i really like the story i love scarxnala but i also love kovuxkiara so im happy for simbaxnala, anyways, can u write a story for me? im not 13 so i cant get a account (and no i wont lie), and my idea for the story i the later chapters become a little m rated, not a lot though, and there are only like 4 scar and nala story and 3/4 arent even complet yet after like 2 years anyways please write me back in this story or a diffrent one
hey i really like the story i love scarxnala but i also love kovuxkiara so im happy for simbaxnala, anyways, can u write a story for me? im not 13 so i cant get a account (and no i wont lie), and my idea for the story i the later chapters become a little m rated, not a lot though, and there are only like 4 scar and nala story and 3/4 arent even complet yet after like 2 years anyways please write me back in this story or a diffrent one
12/1/2010 c7
24Mini-Chobi
You're in IB too? When are your exams?
Anyway, very nice story. I liked it a lot :D Especially the twist at the end with Vitani!

You're in IB too? When are your exams?
Anyway, very nice story. I liked it a lot :D Especially the twist at the end with Vitani!
11/17/2010 c7
894hearts
This was very good for your first FanFic! I liked how detailed you were with your writing, and your word choices. I usually get lost easily when reading another person’s story- but you did an excellent job at this one, and I didn’t get lost. Not once. YAY! I personally always thought that Vitani was so much more like Scar than Nuka or Kovu ever was, too. Even though Scar isn’t really his father… Don’t know what it is. Maybe it’s the maturity and intelligence that little Vitani has. This was a good one.

This was very good for your first FanFic! I liked how detailed you were with your writing, and your word choices. I usually get lost easily when reading another person’s story- but you did an excellent job at this one, and I didn’t get lost. Not once. YAY! I personally always thought that Vitani was so much more like Scar than Nuka or Kovu ever was, too. Even though Scar isn’t really his father… Don’t know what it is. Maybe it’s the maturity and intelligence that little Vitani has. This was a good one.