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for Transfer of the seal

7/2/2011 c1 XAuthoress.ExtraordinaireX
Nice!
3/29/2011 c4 7LiviaHyde7
I really like this idea it is new, although i'm a bit confused about how the seal ended up on Luke and also where is the Naruto world in this universe since they obviously dont have contact with other planets? I can't wait for later on with the fight with Vader, Sith Lord vs Ninja, now that will be a good fight! And if you do continue this will there be any other Naruto characters or is it just Star Wars? :)
9/29/2009 c2 Chaosblader501
YAY!this is sounding good please update
8/10/2009 c2 Dracomancer1
You're writing way to fast. I can tell because of your chatty vocabulary and sentence structure as well as the fact that you don't use paragraphs. Do all of these more. Congrats on making it to the second chapter. I will give you a bit of advice for writing the rest of the story: Choose and stay with the decision of whether to do a "This is what it would be like if" and have the characters behave like they did in the inspirational media, or a "i'm going to do a completely new take on these or this character". Stick with your decisions and plan your writing out beforehand. If you feel like you write better off the top of your head, then fine. Do that. But i recommend planning. Keep up the good work.
8/5/2009 c1 3Ninja Magic
Very interesting and original idea. I look forward to reading more.

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