for Tipping the Scales7/24/2016 c18 
1FFKing1140
please, please update this story... this story is so amazing, and I need more... it's been nearly two and a half years since you've updated... please don't abandon it. please...
1FFKing1140please, please update this story... this story is so amazing, and I need more... it's been nearly two and a half years since you've updated... please don't abandon it. please...
6/11/2016 c18 FFKing1140
I read every chapter in one day, please update, I need to know what happens next!
I read every chapter in one day, please update, I need to know what happens next!
10/3/2015 c18 IttyBittyBuggy
Idk how I got here *looks around* but I like it! Kickass story - please update its soo cute and I would hate to see a fic with such potential get pushed on the abandoned shelf. I'll give you cookies! *offers basket of assorted cookies* Good luck!
Idk how I got here *looks around* but I like it! Kickass story - please update its soo cute and I would hate to see a fic with such potential get pushed on the abandoned shelf. I'll give you cookies! *offers basket of assorted cookies* Good luck!
7/29/2015 c1 Guest
Lame Yaio
Lame Yaio
7/29/2015 c18 6nameless-ice-goddess
Please update! I love this story! This is the first ever Jake/Ron fic I have ever read and I have fallen in love! Please update!
6nameless-ice-goddessPlease update! I love this story! This is the first ever Jake/Ron fic I have ever read and I have fallen in love! Please update!
2/11/2015 c10 32Nekoyasha12
I know what the Harpies prophecy is! XD
"Line of three are held together by the blood of one"... It's the baby! Since it has Artemis, Jake and Wade's blood all bound into Ron's inside the baby! (I think at least...) Onward to the next chapter!
32Nekoyasha12I know what the Harpies prophecy is! XD
"Line of three are held together by the blood of one"... It's the baby! Since it has Artemis, Jake and Wade's blood all bound into Ron's inside the baby! (I think at least...) Onward to the next chapter!
9/7/2014 c18 3Yumi Hiroko
To start, the things I like about your story:
1. The setup
2. The storyline; and how you focus on the story and not entirely on the smut (which I notice a lot of writers do)
3. The pacing
What I dislike about your story:
1. Please remember that I caught up to this in one day (and my friend was demanding my attention via Skype my grandma was watching a movie right next to me) I feel like there were a lot of "Where the hell did you come from?" moments.
2. Also, a lot of questions. Like, why are the Twins in NYC? Why have you written none of the backlash from the battle (which I thought was the least well paced part of your story so far)? What's the whole deal with the bond? Why so little elaboration on it? ect. (I don't need direct answers to these questions. Try to answer some of them in the story, 'kay? :)
3. The lack of settings. It seems like you are shoving a ton of characters into a small space for almost no reason.
That said, your BETA request is something I might be able to help you with. I am working on becoming a Book Editor, so requests like yours I like. Of the fandoms you've stated, I can be useful with Inuyasha, Kim Possible, American Dragon, Avengers, Iron Man, Harry Potter, Labyrinth, ect. I am familiar with Spirited Away, although I'm not huge in the fandom. And a mention on the craziness of your brain... my best friend's is far more convoluted and I can follow/edit her stuff easily.
The only bad things I can say about myself are that I am in college, so I might not be able to get to answering you immediately. If I don't return something within a week, then I need to be reminded that I haven't done it. And I'm not a HUGE fan of smut, but I can handle it in doses. (Such as what TS has)
Sayonara,
- LeAcH
3Yumi HirokoTo start, the things I like about your story:
1. The setup
2. The storyline; and how you focus on the story and not entirely on the smut (which I notice a lot of writers do)
3. The pacing
What I dislike about your story:
1. Please remember that I caught up to this in one day (and my friend was demanding my attention via Skype my grandma was watching a movie right next to me) I feel like there were a lot of "Where the hell did you come from?" moments.
2. Also, a lot of questions. Like, why are the Twins in NYC? Why have you written none of the backlash from the battle (which I thought was the least well paced part of your story so far)? What's the whole deal with the bond? Why so little elaboration on it? ect. (I don't need direct answers to these questions. Try to answer some of them in the story, 'kay? :)
3. The lack of settings. It seems like you are shoving a ton of characters into a small space for almost no reason.
That said, your BETA request is something I might be able to help you with. I am working on becoming a Book Editor, so requests like yours I like. Of the fandoms you've stated, I can be useful with Inuyasha, Kim Possible, American Dragon, Avengers, Iron Man, Harry Potter, Labyrinth, ect. I am familiar with Spirited Away, although I'm not huge in the fandom. And a mention on the craziness of your brain... my best friend's is far more convoluted and I can follow/edit her stuff easily.
The only bad things I can say about myself are that I am in college, so I might not be able to get to answering you immediately. If I don't return something within a week, then I need to be reminded that I haven't done it. And I'm not a HUGE fan of smut, but I can handle it in doses. (Such as what TS has)
Sayonara,
- LeAcH
7/12/2014 c18 Kimmiko T
I really love this story!
Please update really soon or as soon as you can!
Thanx!
I really love this story!
Please update really soon or as soon as you can!
Thanx!
5/15/2014 c5 YesPleaseTea
I was laughing when you started mentioning Artemis Fowl xD. That series is awesome!
Anywho cool story so far. Now I shall go read the rest *salute*
I was laughing when you started mentioning Artemis Fowl xD. That series is awesome!
Anywho cool story so far. Now I shall go read the rest *salute*
2/23/2014 c18 Luvlylexy
-waves her and wildly in the air to volunteer to be the BETA- OH! OH! ME! ME! PICK ME!
-waves her and wildly in the air to volunteer to be the BETA- OH! OH! ME! ME! PICK ME!
2/22/2014 c18 3HeidiFox
Id love to help! I'm quite knowledgeable for homestuck, harry potter, naruto, inuyasha, Hannibal and a few others. However, I'm not familiar with Skyfall at all.
Also, great chapter!
3HeidiFoxId love to help! I'm quite knowledgeable for homestuck, harry potter, naruto, inuyasha, Hannibal and a few others. However, I'm not familiar with Skyfall at all.
Also, great chapter!
1/27/2014 c16 2loyalwolf21
was really happy to see this updated! its been one of my favorite story's for a long time now. i love re reading it, its really well done. really hope to see more i was worried this story was abandoned glad to see you're still writing. thanks for such a good story
-loyalwolf21
2loyalwolf21was really happy to see this updated! its been one of my favorite story's for a long time now. i love re reading it, its really well done. really hope to see more i was worried this story was abandoned glad to see you're still writing. thanks for such a good story
-loyalwolf21