
6/5/2010 c1
32tokiya-kun18
Jaysus, I guess Cagalli has it tough. She still hopes that Athrun will come back despite knowing the truth that he's already dead. Aww. . . )-:

Jaysus, I guess Cagalli has it tough. She still hopes that Athrun will come back despite knowing the truth that he's already dead. Aww. . . )-:
11/15/2009 c1
50AnimeSiren
It was a very lovely story, even though it was sad! lol
I enjoyed the flashback and the the present day scene switch, might I suggest maybe adding a bit more description like maybe the shading and lighting of the house, maybe when she touches a table or the coffee cup adding descriptions to that as well.
It was a great one-shot!

It was a very lovely story, even though it was sad! lol
I enjoyed the flashback and the the present day scene switch, might I suggest maybe adding a bit more description like maybe the shading and lighting of the house, maybe when she touches a table or the coffee cup adding descriptions to that as well.
It was a great one-shot!
10/20/2009 c1 ca-thrun
=(
*sob*
*sniff-sniff*
...what a sad ending...i feel bad for my favorite character...well..great job...its nice to read a story with a sad ending though..hehe...hope to read some of your other works soon...xao2x...mwah!...=)
=(
*sob*
*sniff-sniff*
...what a sad ending...i feel bad for my favorite character...well..great job...its nice to read a story with a sad ending though..hehe...hope to read some of your other works soon...xao2x...mwah!...=)
9/21/2009 c1 Asato
I beg you to write a sequel!...(*ahem*..where athrun is not dead*ahem*)..hha..i like the story..it was painful,...for me...im happy! i like mental masochism!to be exact mental sadomasochism through fanfics...
why?How could you kill ATHRUN..hha..yah..i am crazy...I agree with you Puddlesama is awesome..
Well..I was thinkin...iof she like rushed to the scene..Athrun may have not been dead..and then seeing her would like give him hope or sumthin...hha..dont mind me im crazy..i think i read that sumwhere b4..
love the paIN...great story..
I beg you to write a sequel!...(*ahem*..where athrun is not dead*ahem*)..hha..i like the story..it was painful,...for me...im happy! i like mental masochism!to be exact mental sadomasochism through fanfics...
why?How could you kill ATHRUN..hha..yah..i am crazy...I agree with you Puddlesama is awesome..
Well..I was thinkin...iof she like rushed to the scene..Athrun may have not been dead..and then seeing her would like give him hope or sumthin...hha..dont mind me im crazy..i think i read that sumwhere b4..
love the paIN...great story..
8/18/2009 c1 memeylupht
Sigh ,... Actually,i don't wanna review like i always did! it's so sad ? (sniff..sniff...)
but I like it anyway,really touching. Keep workin' ne...
Sigh ,... Actually,i don't wanna review like i always did! it's so sad ? (sniff..sniff...)
but I like it anyway,really touching. Keep workin' ne...
8/18/2009 c1 memeylupht
Sigh ,... Actually,i don't wanna review like i always did! it's so sad ? (sniff..sniff...)
but I like it anyway,really touching. Keep workin' ne...
Sigh ,... Actually,i don't wanna review like i always did! it's so sad ? (sniff..sniff...)
but I like it anyway,really touching. Keep workin' ne...
8/18/2009 c1 memeylupht
Sigh ,... Actually,i don't wanna review like i always did! it's so sad ? (sniff..sniff...)
but I like it anyway,really touching. Keep workin' ne...
Sigh ,... Actually,i don't wanna review like i always did! it's so sad ? (sniff..sniff...)
but I like it anyway,really touching. Keep workin' ne...
8/7/2009 c1
6flanauCaramel
YOU KILLED HIM! Why? Oh no :'( lol That was really well written! But so sad... Poor Cags :(

YOU KILLED HIM! Why? Oh no :'( lol That was really well written! But so sad... Poor Cags :(
8/6/2009 c1
9Xx Meisha xX
Wow.
powerful story.
I can't believe Athrun...
Didn't like what happened but the idea and writing was really good!
I'm a little confused about the "2 day" thing. Why did Cagalli say he was going to come home in "2 days"? Before he left he just said he'd come right back home, right?
I look forward to reading more of your work. =)
- Archerygurl

Wow.
powerful story.
I can't believe Athrun...
Didn't like what happened but the idea and writing was really good!
I'm a little confused about the "2 day" thing. Why did Cagalli say he was going to come home in "2 days"? Before he left he just said he'd come right back home, right?
I look forward to reading more of your work. =)
- Archerygurl
8/6/2009 c1
5Puddlesama
You write the denial of losing a loved one very well. This pulled at my heartstrings. RIP Athrun Zala. You were loved.
Now, STOP KILLING ASU-WAN IN YOUR DREAMS! :O

You write the denial of losing a loved one very well. This pulled at my heartstrings. RIP Athrun Zala. You were loved.
Now, STOP KILLING ASU-WAN IN YOUR DREAMS! :O