
7/1/2013 c6 NotYouNotMe
Very cute story. But you need to edit your story very bad.
Very cute story. But you need to edit your story very bad.
3/6/2010 c6
1his golden perfection
yay, pretty good chapter! are you going to update soon? i hope so. :)

yay, pretty good chapter! are you going to update soon? i hope so. :)
1/21/2010 c4 his golden perfection
heyy
i came across this story, and i have a few things to say about it. don't worry, i don't insult stories ;)
there's nothing wrong with your story or anything.
i'd consider using more puctuation maybe.
other than that, it was good. :)
u didn't decide to drop this story did you? plz say no!
cuz i think u should update. =)
~Alexandra♥
heyy
i came across this story, and i have a few things to say about it. don't worry, i don't insult stories ;)
there's nothing wrong with your story or anything.
i'd consider using more puctuation maybe.
other than that, it was good. :)
u didn't decide to drop this story did you? plz say no!
cuz i think u should update. =)
~Alexandra♥