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5/10/2010 c8 Chocolate2-7Obsession
WOAH! I LIKE THE COOL AMY!
5/10/2010 c8 nxstx
This is a really good chapter! But you had a mistake in Jonah's name and I just noticed that Amy keeps saying the word 'damn'. But I like how she's now very confident and extraordinary. Don't mind other people's comment saying that she turned into a Mary Sue. I find it really amazing that everybody looks up to her because she's sort of 'perfect' and there is a lot more to Mary Sue that isn't portrayed in this story. For example : that she had a horrible past and that she is exotic. I love this story and I hope you update soon.
5/10/2010 c8 46Joelle8
Good chapter! Please update soon!
5/10/2010 c8 6music4evah
...It's JONAH. With and H. No s. H.

Also, it's not really possible that Amy could be a Madrigal and Dan couldn't...Or that Dan could be a Lucian and Amy couldn't...(I didn't think he'd be a Lucian, though, anyways. Ekaterina. Duh.) I don't care what you say, it just can't happen. Does it make sense to you?

Does it?

...I thought not. (Well, I'm just assuming, as I can't exactly converse with you directly...)

Sadly, Amy is now a Mary-Sue. How depressing.
5/2/2010 c6 Bob
Can yo please stop csing!
5/2/2010 c5 Bob
I think its a horrible chapter.
5/1/2010 c7 12charonmilkcat
that was AWESOME! The powers are so cool! update quickly please! I can't wait to see their expressions! update!
4/30/2010 c7 Vampire-Historian-Crazy-Teen3
Great story!...
Interesting! I love how you made Dan a lucian...I always thought he was anyway. Amy being a Madrigal? Brilient:) I can't wait too read what happends when she goes to the 4 branch meeting!
Oh and is there going to be any romance in this story? just wondering:)
Please update soon!
Take care,
~(V.H)~
4/28/2010 c7 1ashleybett
THAT WAS THE BEST! U REALLY SHOULD UPDATE MORE OFTEN THOUGH
4/28/2010 c7 3owlgirl16
Wow, this is really intense. I can absolutely not WAIT for the next chapter!
4/28/2010 c7 4Arcy911913
I've been waiting for this chapter!

Anyway,

The clue solution made Amy a MARY SUE!

Other than that, no comments. Hope you update soon!
4/27/2010 c7 Chocolate2-7Obsession
I can't wait for the next chapter! ah! continue continue continue!
4/27/2010 c7 CrimsonComet
OMG! BRAVO! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!1
4/27/2010 c7 30XxXMika-ChanXxX
pardon my french but HOLY SHIT! that was good r u sure ur not an author for the books cuz u could so write one.
4/27/2010 c7 Dragonfeith
Update!
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