for The Past Returns12/29/2003 c14 heart shot girl
Beautiful.
Absolutly beautiful - some misspelled words but nothing big and hardly noticed. The plot was nicely done, and it was easy to follow and I liked the fact that Julia saved Faye - something I wouldn't have thought of. Nice job.
Beautiful.
Absolutly beautiful - some misspelled words but nothing big and hardly noticed. The plot was nicely done, and it was easy to follow and I liked the fact that Julia saved Faye - something I wouldn't have thought of. Nice job.
11/7/2002 c14 kathy
your story had some gramatical and spelling errors which made it a little hard for me to understand what you were trying to get across to the reader sometimes, but all-in-all in was a FABULOUS story, just FABULOUS!
ps. hope you come out with a sequal, like where Faye's past comes back to haunt her and she's having these horrific nightmares about a memory that hasn't returned yet or she didn't know of, something dramatic but nothing having to do with a past love or the syndicate. And while they are chasing after her past she get badly injured where she can't go outside of the bebop for a while let alone even walk for a while (spike must carry her to the bedroom and places like that.) and she is caught a few time sitting and starring staight out the wall-size-window jumbled memories in her mind and when she tries to get up she faints into Spike or Jet's arms. :)
you know, things like that. :) :)
(i know i am a total nerd about this stuff ;}
your story had some gramatical and spelling errors which made it a little hard for me to understand what you were trying to get across to the reader sometimes, but all-in-all in was a FABULOUS story, just FABULOUS!
ps. hope you come out with a sequal, like where Faye's past comes back to haunt her and she's having these horrific nightmares about a memory that hasn't returned yet or she didn't know of, something dramatic but nothing having to do with a past love or the syndicate. And while they are chasing after her past she get badly injured where she can't go outside of the bebop for a while let alone even walk for a while (spike must carry her to the bedroom and places like that.) and she is caught a few time sitting and starring staight out the wall-size-window jumbled memories in her mind and when she tries to get up she faints into Spike or Jet's arms. :)
you know, things like that. :) :)
(i know i am a total nerd about this stuff ;}
7/22/2002 c14 someone
That's a good story, a lot of these events I have seen in movies, but I liked it.
That's a good story, a lot of these events I have seen in movies, but I liked it.
5/26/2002 c14 
1Makaylia
WOOHOO! AWesome ending! Love that Julia saved Faye, it made me like her for a nanosecond! (Faye Rocks!)
Great story! YOu should write more soon
1MakayliaWOOHOO! AWesome ending! Love that Julia saved Faye, it made me like her for a nanosecond! (Faye Rocks!)
Great story! YOu should write more soon
5/26/2002 c3 Makaylia
Yeowza! Spike's in the mood and he ain't takin' no for an answer! Nice chapter! ^_^
Yeowza! Spike's in the mood and he ain't takin' no for an answer! Nice chapter! ^_^
5/1/2002 c14 esther
What a great story! I Love happy endings.^_^
What a great story! I Love happy endings.^_^
4/1/2002 c14 Tsuaskikitty
Very nicely written! I love the romance between Spike and Faye. These are two of my favorite characters, thanks for writing a story involving both of them along with rest of the CB crew. I hope to see more of your work.
See you later
Very nicely written! I love the romance between Spike and Faye. These are two of my favorite characters, thanks for writing a story involving both of them along with rest of the CB crew. I hope to see more of your work.
See you later
3/28/2002 c14 2Mei Tsuki Kage
I FUCKIN HATE YOU!
VICIOUS DIED AND DIDN'T EVEN TAKE SPIKE WITH HIM!
FFFFFFFUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKKKKK YYYYYYYUUUUUOOOOOOO!
2Mei Tsuki KageI FUCKIN HATE YOU!
VICIOUS DIED AND DIDN'T EVEN TAKE SPIKE WITH HIM!
FFFFFFFUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKKKKK YYYYYYYUUUUUOOOOOOO!
3/28/2002 c12 Mei Tsuki Kage
hey! Vicious is not that cold/sick
evil, yes
but don't teist his character
hey! Vicious is not that cold/sick
evil, yes
but don't teist his character
3/24/2002 c14 Tree Kat
*Applause* wow, that was a trip! Nicely written, good plot...only one thing its lacking...A SEQUEL!(hint, hint) but, if you think that would ruin it than another story would do (grins) Keep on writing!
*Applause* wow, that was a trip! Nicely written, good plot...only one thing its lacking...A SEQUEL!(hint, hint) but, if you think that would ruin it than another story would do (grins) Keep on writing!
3/21/2002 c14 Lisa
And the crowd goes wild! That was too good! Eric's so cute! Seeing Spike settle down, and with Faye, who could ask for anything more!
Take A Bow Space Cowgirl!
And the crowd goes wild! That was too good! Eric's so cute! Seeing Spike settle down, and with Faye, who could ask for anything more!
Take A Bow Space Cowgirl!