for Fragments of a Girl Soft and Sentimental8/26/2009 c1 Bat
Wow. Brilliant. Absolutely . . . wow.
I DID guess the twist, though. Not the END twist, I guessed it was really Peter. You're a genius.
Wow. Brilliant. Absolutely . . . wow.
I DID guess the twist, though. Not the END twist, I guessed it was really Peter. You're a genius.
8/21/2009 c1 
13filthysmile
Wow... That was sick and good at the same time! I loved the end, truth be told i thought it was sylar torturing her but it was genious to make it an illusion of peter!
13filthysmileWow... That was sick and good at the same time! I loved the end, truth be told i thought it was sylar torturing her but it was genious to make it an illusion of peter!
8/13/2009 c1 2DivineSynder
Wow. That was creepy. In other words, I liked it. In the beginning I thought I knew who was keeping her captive but when you stated that they had once been best friends I kinda figured I was wrong.
I like the flow of the story. I also like how you wrote the torture/rape scenes because the detaials weren't overdrawn.
All in all I enjoyed the story and think you did an awesome job!
2DivineSynderWow. That was creepy. In other words, I liked it. In the beginning I thought I knew who was keeping her captive but when you stated that they had once been best friends I kinda figured I was wrong.
I like the flow of the story. I also like how you wrote the torture/rape scenes because the detaials weren't overdrawn.
All in all I enjoyed the story and think you did an awesome job!
8/10/2009 c1 Athene
HOLY CRAP! All I can say just...wow, that awesome and very dark. Especially the ending!
HOLY CRAP! All I can say just...wow, that awesome and very dark. Especially the ending!
8/10/2009 c1 sisterspock
oh my god! *FLAIL!* That was devastatingly beautiful. PLEASE WRITE MORE.
oh my god! *FLAIL!* That was devastatingly beautiful. PLEASE WRITE MORE.